oh snap, English is not my first language, it is actually the third, but let's give it a try (without Kanye West, dude irritates me), a motivational one, in ABAB style.
when pride and presumption walk before,
shame and loss follow very close
and the feeling of joy is in your heart no more
heart falls apart, like the petals from a rose
hear me friend, cause i hear your screams
not from your anger, but screaming from your soul
do not let your pride shatter all your dreams
do not let your arrogance ruin your heart as whole
have you ever loved, so that heart does not desire
to own the thing that makes it beat much stronger
and to know the joy of love like the burning fire
that will make you think of yourself no longer ?
forget about what you want from others
feel the feelings that others speak not loud
threat all people like sisters and brothers
and then my friend - you'll be truly proud!
well, this is my first English written poetry, so i guess i sucked real hard, i apologize in advance :)
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