I don't know how to critique well, and graphite/pencil isn't really my forte, so the only thing I can really say is that it looks like you put a lot of effort into the little details in this image. But maybe it would look more natural or confident without the outlines on all the scales and contours being so heavy (or full?)? I don't even know if I am explaining this right, so feel free to ignore me~ XD
Those charms are sooooo cuuuteee.. @__@
Ahh the angel and demon one is about angels and demons and how they have come into our existence from our imagination and how desensitization and dilution of souls (over population and the like) has left humans unable to create any more of these spirits. Itís an adventure on how Ascillas (the angel) must come to terms with this and figure out the purpose of life. My goal for this year is to start the comic and make some lesbian fairy tale comics too xD I made some charms of them:
Thatís cool I donít think I would ever have the guts to do that. Starting your thesis did you know you wanted those pieces (your body parts) in for sure? Did you major in sculpture? LOL youíre cute ďAt first I was unsureĒ XD. I agree with that, I dropped many projects because my heart wasnít in them anymore (or that was just unprofessionalism lol).
That would be cool I love little trinkets especially little papers and tiny things like matchboxes decoupaging them with images (I donít do this now but when I was a kid I was obsessed with that stuff). YES their still amazing (comic artists) but I guess practice makes perfect. Hmm do you work digitally at all? Ahh do you have pictures of them? That sounds cool.
Your superstition is a little funny. I used to think a lot like that, since I created some.. pretty evil OCs and then I wondered if I ever drew in bad (like evil spirits lol) stuff because the OCs represented all this terribleness and maybe they would give me bad luck. >_>
I kind of got over it though because.. I uhh.. make enough powerful goodguys to balance it out and defeat them. lol (I know it's all supersttion too, but it's kind of fun?)
Hope you do get to making a comic of them! I know I always want to but.. omg.. it's SO DAUNTING!
I think this image from tumblr (originally form cryptovolans) explains it all:
SO, while I keep procrastinating on the dream of making "My Great Idea for a Comic" (tm), I do character designs and other side things instead.. like this recent character profile image~:
Dysta's a spirit of friendship and justice. lol