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David Cage is not the sole writer or director of Detroit: Become Human

viveks86

Member
This is great news. Cage has excellent ideas, but is terrible at weaving it into a narrative. This seems like the right combination
 

Diamond

Member
I welcome them.
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Just like one of my french vidyagames !
 
That said, the trailer already had the usual David Cage bad dialogue, so I'm not going to hold.my breath.

Given the quality of the trailer dialogue it doesn't seem to have done much.
Which was likely entirely written by Cage just for this trailer, given that the writers left after finishing their script duties. This is typical trailer voice over that is not part of the actual game script.


Then they should have used them for the trailer. They didn't (hopefully) so i will judge what was presented to me. Which was bad.
Probably not possible considering they left last year after finishing the script. They probably didnt work on the marketing materials that much.


I dunno, the Become Human trailer was fantastically pretentious, precious and up its own arse that Im not sure it isn't a one man David Cage show again
Well, as you can clearly see, its not. Its a 4 man show.
 
FWIW, I think I've come down a bit on my opinion of the shower/underwear scene stuff in these games. It's a very French cinema trope, and I think the biggest issue with this series of games is less the existence of nude characters showering and whatnot, it's just the general hammy/trashy vibe those scenes give off when the rest of the games are typically trying to be serious American dramas set in the states. It's a tone thing I guess.

Still, the concepts for these games are so out there I'd rather see QD try and mess up than not try at all, although Detroit doesn't look like it's making any strides in the presentation department even if they are shaking up the writing. It looks mad corny.
 

meanspartan

Member
Despite the other writers, I bet David Cage will still somehow manage to get a shower scene and a underwear scene for the female main character, like all his other previous games:

Oh absolutely, especially after Ex Machina did it.

Well not shower I guess, just general nudity.
 

Diamond

Member
I've always been thinking Cage should stick to designing his games and stop writing them. I admit the two are closely interwoven in each of Quantic Dream products, but working closely with a good writer would greatly improve what Cage is doing. Now it remains to be seen if he really wants to give away some of his control and if they hired actual good writers.
 
The less writing Cage does, the better. Hopefully this is a situation where they're all coming up with ideas and on the same level, and it's not Cage throwing his weight around and making them make his pervy female character scenes "believable."
 

RoboPlato

I'd be in the dick
I think Cage has great core concepts and is a solid director but the more nuanced writing and dialogue is where he falls apart. If the other writers can help him in that area it would be a real boon to the game and he can focus on direction.
 

KoopaTheCasual

Junior Member
Didn't Beyond also have multiple writers? Or am I misremembering. Because it didn't save that game.

Yeah. It's as if people forgot because Beyond exists >_>

Oh right. People hate HR too because they keep mistaking a scene with an unreliable narrator for a "plot hole"

Nevermind those scenes of
Ethan
waking up in the rain. Those were unexplained and weird because they changed a whole aspect of the story right at the end of production, but IMO it wasn't a plot hole still, and the rest of the plot was great, thematically inconsistent side-stories aside.
"No plot holes!"
*mentions the biggest plot hole people have gripes with, and hand waves it away*
 
Makes sense after the shitshow that was Beyond: Two Souls.

All the other David Cage games have been at their weakest as soon as supernatural elements started being introduced (and not explained properly). If this sticks to a more straight forward sci-fi plot, I still believe it could turn out pretty great.

Didn't Beyond also have multiple writers? Or am I misremembering. Because it didn't save that game.

Nope. Cage was the sole writer and director of that game.
 

Raoh

Member
My Android Body Is Ready!


I don't care what people say, Quantic Dream games are some of the most entertaining games around.
 

Axbarn

Banned
Didn't Beyond also have multiple writers? Or am I misremembering. Because it didn't save that game.


"No plot holes!"
*mentions the biggest plot hole people have gripes with, and hand waves it away*

And what exactly is the plot-hole in those scenes? I saw it as a contrivance but not an impossibility or contradiction which is what plot holes are. too many people think plot hole = unexplained development, when that's never the case. A plot hole is when something happens that can't actually happen because continuity/physics/law is broken.

Okay it is super hokey, but my headcanon was actually that
Ethan's psychological trauma left him mentally ill, and during his blackout/personality twists he goes to that location where he wakes up everytime, and because the killer stalked him for years, he used that to give Ethan the clues.
. I don't see any immediate contradictions about that.
 

Vlaphor

Member
Despite the other writers, I bet David Cage will still somehow manage to get a shower scene and a underwear scene for the female main character, like all his other previous games:

...and with the power of the ps4 backing it up.

One can only hope.
 

Fbh

Member
Nevermind those scenes of
Ethan
waking up in the rain. Those were unexplained and weird because they changed a whole aspect of the story right at the end of production, but IMO it wasn't a plot hole still, and the rest of the plot was great, thematically inconsistent side-stories aside.

The character wakes up in the rain, holding the same origami that the killer uses and with no memory of the past few hours. This is shown as a major plot point and also results in both the character and the audience thinking that he might actully be the killer.

Nothing about that plot point is ever explained, the whole thing has no impact on the story and the whole issue is never brought up again. How is that, in any way, NOT a plothole?

Yes, I know it has an explanation and that they made changes to the story late into development. But that's not an excuse!. If you take out a major plot point from the story you take out all of it, you don't leave half of the scenes in there. Imagine if Darth Vader had just disappeared in the middle of Empire Strikes back and never shown up again and then George Lucas was like "yeah we had a whole plot with Vader which involved a hidden relationship with Luke and Leia. But then late into production we decided to take him out"
 
Didn't Beyond also have multiple writers?
It didnt. Cage wrote the entire scenario and most of the dialogue. Only some ambient and foreign dialogue was written by other people.


Yes, I know it has an explanation and that they made changes to the story late into development. But that's not an excuse!. If you take out a major plot point from the story you take out all of it
...then you need to re-do pretty much the entire second half of the game though. They should have just kept the explanation tbh. Games are way too costly to re-do a big chunk of it just because of story reasons. Even if its warranted, a game publisher wont be as understanding as a movie publisher would. Keeping it in there seems like it was the best option, but maybe Sony saw the Fahrenheit backlash and decided it was not going to happen and opted to create a massive red herring instead.


That's not even the worst one tho!
What about the fact that you can
read the thoughts of the goddamn killer the whole game, and he's thinking about catching the killer, who is him, TO HIMSELF!
I get he wanted the twist ending, but that's not an unreliable narrator. That's just lying to the player.
Yeah, this only really works if
Shelby has a split personality. The game does hint towards the fact that he is suffering from that, but it should have been spelled out more if thats what he was going for.
 

semisonic

Banned
And what exactly is the plot-hole in those scenes? I saw it as a contrivance but not an impossibility or contradiction which is what plot holes are. too many people think plot hole = unexplained development, when that's never the case. A plot hole is when something happens that can't actually happen because continuity/physics/law is broken.

Okay it is super hokey, but my headcanon was actually that
Ethan's psychological trauma left him mentally ill, and during his blackout/personality twists he goes to that location where he wakes up everytime, and because the killer stalked him for years, he used that to give Ethan the clues.
. I don't see any immediate contradictions about that.

That's not even the worst one tho!
What about the fact that you can
read the thoughts of the goddamn killer the whole game, and he's thinking about catching the killer, who is him, TO HIMSELF!
I get he wanted the twist ending, but that's not an unreliable narrator. That's just lying to the player.
 

dr_rus

Member
Despite the other writers, I bet David Cage will still somehow manage to get a shower scene and a underwear scene for the female main character, like all his other previous games:

Way ahead of you there with underwear at least:

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Azzanadra

Member
A bit unrelated, but how did David Cage become such a personality within video games? I mean he has only made like three or four games I think, and yet his name is as recognizable as Kojima or Miyamato in the video gaming community. With video games, you don't really know the "director" or the head honcho of a game sans the really big ones like Specter, Miyamoto etc. so how did Cage become so big, seeing as most people don't even like his games?

Its like when someone says "David Cage" around here you immediately know who he is, no google search needed. Heck, I have never even played a game by Quantic Dream but I know who cage is.
 
A bit unrelated, but how did David Cage become such a personality within video games? I mean he has only made like three or four games I think, and yet his name is as recognizable as Kojima or Miyamato in the video gaming community. With video games, you don't really know the "director" or the head honcho of a game sans the really big ones like Specter, Miyamoto etc. so how did Cage become so big, seeing as most people don't even like his games?

Its like when someone says "David Cage" around here you immediately know who he is, no google search needed. Heck, I have never even played a game by Quantic Dream but I know who cage is.

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A bit unrelated, but how did David Cage become such a personality within video games? I mean he has only made like three or four games I think, and yet his name is as recognizable as Kojima or Miyamato in the video gaming community. With video games, you don't really know the "director" or the head honcho of a game sans the really big ones like Specter, Miyamoto etc. so how did Cage become so big, seeing as most people don't even like his games?

Its like when someone says "David Cage" around here you immediately know who he is, no google search needed. Heck, I have never even played a game by Quantic Dream but I know who cage is.
He was the sole face of his titles for the longest time. Western publishers are generally apprehensive about that and dont like auteurs to emerge and undermine their authority. Hence not many exist. Cage managed to push through by being pretty charismatic, delivering convincing pitches to publishers and actually managed to deliver as well. His work always releases on time and on budget and mostly sees great critical and commercial success for the budget they have. They are vanity products for a lot of publishers and Cage was smart enough to built an efficient studio that can create them on a AAA level while not requiring a mountain of cash. He is still very unique in that aspect and also surrounded by smart business men.

He will continue to get work for quite some time despite his infamous status. Cause he is a good game producer.
 

gabagool

Banned
Despite the other writers, I bet David Cage will still somehow manage to get a shower scene and a underwear scene for the female main character, like all his other previous games:
The shower scenes? What about the forced rape scenes?
 

Rhaknar

The Steam equivalent of the drunk friend who keeps offering to pay your tab all night.
David Cage, the M.Night Shyamalan of videogames

;_;
 

Jinfash

needs 2 extra inches
4 people involved in writing and directing, and none of them thought the title was horrible.
 
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