John Dunbar
correct about everything
Palaces in the Air
1,900 words, quote to see password
1,900 words, quote to see password
What happened to that online dating story set in a future war? I was excited to read it.There's always next time, right friends?
What happened to that online dating story set in a future war? I was excited to read it.
Oh no, it's okay. You did better than me, you actually got some opening paragraphs!Now I feel extra bad. Spent a few hours yesterday just writing different opening paragraphs. Thought the last one would be workable. Too bad I didn't have much time to write at all today. New deadline, same result. -_-
Oh no, it's okay. You did better than me, you actually got some opening paragraphs!
Tangent, I can't see your story. I don't know is it just me, but when I enter the password all I see is just a single blank page.
I'm getting the same thing.
My writing process usually involves in image or two that I then write into a sentence. Typically that sentence involves a certain style, which then gets expanded, if I enjoy the tone or the kernel of a story it supposes, into the rest of the story. Most of these for me are exploratory, and involve my attempts to stretch a theme or concept to its breaking point. As a result, writing these pieces end up like a rubber band just past its elastic limit. Useful in exercise, maybe not so much in the end result.
Ourobolus - Short and concise, though hoping for inspiration is a cliche around these parts. At least the potato made it out okay.
I tried, but I really found it to be unworkable :/Mike M - The problem for me personally is the story within the story is more interesting that the frame story. Not that the frame story is bad, but it's just overwhelmed by Teddy's battle against the Nazis. You should have toned down the detail on that to bring up the frame, or just tell the adventure serial instead.
For some reason I can't figure out how to open Ashes' file. Does it use a nonstandard password?
password has to do with an abbreviated neogaf
I wasn't stringent about the story deadline. I'm not going to be harsh on the voting one either.
As a first-timer, if you don't make it you will be banned from participating in future challenges forever.I too am going to be pushing it till the end, but I'm determined to finish in the next several hours.
At first I was sad, and then relieved.As a first-timer, if you don't make it you will be banned from participating in future challenges forever.
No, not really.
Ashes1396:The way the Quran quotations were presented tickled me the wrong way: how the parts of the book were put in brackets took me out because I wondered did the guy actually say them after every line, or were they just added so a reader could look them up if they were so inclined? People who talk in quotations are obnoxious enough as they are, adding sources just makes it worse.
I don't do HMs because anyone not given one knows they weren't even close to being voted for. But apart from JD, whose story stood head and shoulders above the competition for me, it was a close call between my second place and stories that didn't make the top three. So don't be disheartened or resentful, it was a close call. I'll try to get observations done but time is limited.
I didn't mean to suggest HMs are wrong, just that it's a personal choice for me. Hope it wasn't taken as a criticism.@ everyone else: I just wanted to say that for me personally, stories very rarely stand head and shoulders above one another. It's very difficult for me to cut the list down to three. That is also why I like a full list of results at the end, rather than the top three.
I didn't mean to suggest HMs are wrong, just that it's a personal choice for me. Hope it wasn't taken as a criticism.
Also I didn't mean to offend or belittle anyone or suggest JD was the only good entry. The opposite in fact; I had to choose between half a dozen options for second and third.