Theme - "weightless, breathless"
Word Limit -1,000
All submissions that will be counted in the voting process should be in by Monday 3/24/2008 by 11:59 PM PST.
The voting will then begin on Tuesday 3/25/2008 at 12:00 am PST and go until Thursday 3/27/2008 11:59 pm PST
Previous Challenges:
#1 - "The Things Unseen"
#2 - "An Unlikely Pair"
Basic things to remember:
1) There are many ways to interpret the theme for this assignment, we are all writers or wanna-be writers, so keep that in mind when writing and critiquing others' works.
2) Spelling and Grammatical errors can be used to great effect when the story, characters, and setting demand it. However, proofreading and spell-checking your writing will probably result in a more positive attitude towards it when people are voting.
3) All submissions must be written during the time that the thread began until the due date. We don't want a snippet of your doctoral thesis from 1996 being used here.
4) Only one entry per poster. You can submit and then edit, if you'd like, but finalizing before submitting is highly encouraged.
5) Any writing style is welcome, but remember that most people are probably going to vote for the well written short story over an elementary acrostic poem.
6) There is a handy word count checker at www.wordcounttool.com Nobody wants to be a word count nazi, but please keep it under 1000 words.
7) Thousands of people read GAF, so if you don't want some masterpiece of yours to be stolen and seen in Hollywood a year from now, don't post it on here.
8) Using the topic as the title of your piece is highly discouraged. These challenges get a large number of submissions and if entries share the same titles, it's very difficult for the readers to separate them all out come voting time.
Voting Guidelines:
-Anyone can vote, even those that do not submit a piece during the thread.
-Three votes per voter. Please denote in your voting your 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place votes.
-First place votes count as 3, Second Place votes count as 2, and Third Place as 1 point.
-When voting period ends, votes will be tallied and the winner will get a collective pat on the back and will be in charge of picking a new topic to write about and pick the word length.
-Please read all submissions before voting, it is only fair to those who put in the effort.
NOTE TO THE WINNER:
-Generally, people have been comfortable with a 1000 word limit, but you get to choose to lower or raise the limit in the topic of your choice.
-When you start the new thread, please follow the naming scheme, NeoGAF Creative Writing Challenge ## - "your topic here", then copy and paste this thread, changing the theme, due date, voting date, word count, and add the previous theme to the list at the bottom.
THE ENTRIES:
NITEWULF / LOST JULY - ernesto de la cruz chases down the man who killed a loved one
GREAT RUMBLER / A DISTANT CRY COMING OVER THE FACE OF THE WATERS - a space odyssey (2001 + event horizon + sunshine)
REVENTANT KIOKU / SLIPPERY WHEN WET - the dying thoughts of a girl drowning
CHEEBS / THE BEST STORY EVER - math, a stray dog, a wolf, a weight problem, a hospital?
RONITO / SALOME - a conductor's love for a ballerina
VALIS / THURSDAY NIGHT ASTRONAUTS - a bong brings a teenager as close as he'll get to his dream
MIKE WORKS / FINALLY - benjamin tries to hang himself on a tree before luc arrives
RUMPLEDFORESKIN / WEIGHTLESS, BREATHLESS - a kid has an allergic reaction to a turtleneck, or maybe it's the noose
CRUSHED / REMORA - vago dago and byron plan a heist from within a boarding school
OLDSCHOOLGAMER / LOVE AS RAIN IN SPACE - a man who cannot die laments lost love, in space (the fountain redux)
AARON / STRAIGHT SHOT - the first man to travel faster than the speed of light, it didn't go well (sequel to gattaca?)
CYAN / WESTERN FRIED SPAGHETTI - a man daydreams about being in a western during a child's band performance
SCRIBBLE / VACANT INFERNO - a man is a little nervous, but not altogether upset about going to hell
AZIH / FLOATING - a boxing story, but from a different perspective than we're used to
PEDROTHELION / THE KNIGHT - matthew's brother is taken to an asylum, but is he crazy?
BARRAGE / NOT SAFE ENOUGH - robot home security
ICEMAN / ELEVATOR MUSIC - an inferno and a daring downward plunge.
THE RESULTS:
Azih - 17
Cyan - 11 (1 first place vote, 4 second place votes)
Ronito - 11 (1 first place vote, 2 second place votes)
Mike Works - 10
Aaron - 8
Barrage - 7
Valis - 6
Nitewulf - 6
Scribble - 5
Crushed - 2
Iceman - 1
Word Limit -1,000
All submissions that will be counted in the voting process should be in by Monday 3/24/2008 by 11:59 PM PST.
The voting will then begin on Tuesday 3/25/2008 at 12:00 am PST and go until Thursday 3/27/2008 11:59 pm PST
Previous Challenges:
#1 - "The Things Unseen"
#2 - "An Unlikely Pair"
Basic things to remember:
1) There are many ways to interpret the theme for this assignment, we are all writers or wanna-be writers, so keep that in mind when writing and critiquing others' works.
2) Spelling and Grammatical errors can be used to great effect when the story, characters, and setting demand it. However, proofreading and spell-checking your writing will probably result in a more positive attitude towards it when people are voting.
3) All submissions must be written during the time that the thread began until the due date. We don't want a snippet of your doctoral thesis from 1996 being used here.
4) Only one entry per poster. You can submit and then edit, if you'd like, but finalizing before submitting is highly encouraged.
5) Any writing style is welcome, but remember that most people are probably going to vote for the well written short story over an elementary acrostic poem.
6) There is a handy word count checker at www.wordcounttool.com Nobody wants to be a word count nazi, but please keep it under 1000 words.
7) Thousands of people read GAF, so if you don't want some masterpiece of yours to be stolen and seen in Hollywood a year from now, don't post it on here.
8) Using the topic as the title of your piece is highly discouraged. These challenges get a large number of submissions and if entries share the same titles, it's very difficult for the readers to separate them all out come voting time.
Voting Guidelines:
-Anyone can vote, even those that do not submit a piece during the thread.
-Three votes per voter. Please denote in your voting your 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place votes.
-First place votes count as 3, Second Place votes count as 2, and Third Place as 1 point.
-When voting period ends, votes will be tallied and the winner will get a collective pat on the back and will be in charge of picking a new topic to write about and pick the word length.
-Please read all submissions before voting, it is only fair to those who put in the effort.
NOTE TO THE WINNER:
-Generally, people have been comfortable with a 1000 word limit, but you get to choose to lower or raise the limit in the topic of your choice.
-When you start the new thread, please follow the naming scheme, NeoGAF Creative Writing Challenge ## - "your topic here", then copy and paste this thread, changing the theme, due date, voting date, word count, and add the previous theme to the list at the bottom.
THE ENTRIES:
NITEWULF / LOST JULY - ernesto de la cruz chases down the man who killed a loved one
GREAT RUMBLER / A DISTANT CRY COMING OVER THE FACE OF THE WATERS - a space odyssey (2001 + event horizon + sunshine)
REVENTANT KIOKU / SLIPPERY WHEN WET - the dying thoughts of a girl drowning
CHEEBS / THE BEST STORY EVER - math, a stray dog, a wolf, a weight problem, a hospital?
RONITO / SALOME - a conductor's love for a ballerina
VALIS / THURSDAY NIGHT ASTRONAUTS - a bong brings a teenager as close as he'll get to his dream
MIKE WORKS / FINALLY - benjamin tries to hang himself on a tree before luc arrives
RUMPLEDFORESKIN / WEIGHTLESS, BREATHLESS - a kid has an allergic reaction to a turtleneck, or maybe it's the noose
CRUSHED / REMORA - vago dago and byron plan a heist from within a boarding school
OLDSCHOOLGAMER / LOVE AS RAIN IN SPACE - a man who cannot die laments lost love, in space (the fountain redux)
AARON / STRAIGHT SHOT - the first man to travel faster than the speed of light, it didn't go well (sequel to gattaca?)
CYAN / WESTERN FRIED SPAGHETTI - a man daydreams about being in a western during a child's band performance
SCRIBBLE / VACANT INFERNO - a man is a little nervous, but not altogether upset about going to hell
AZIH / FLOATING - a boxing story, but from a different perspective than we're used to
PEDROTHELION / THE KNIGHT - matthew's brother is taken to an asylum, but is he crazy?
BARRAGE / NOT SAFE ENOUGH - robot home security
ICEMAN / ELEVATOR MUSIC - an inferno and a daring downward plunge.
THE RESULTS:
Azih - 17
Cyan - 11 (1 first place vote, 4 second place votes)
Ronito - 11 (1 first place vote, 2 second place votes)
Mike Works - 10
Aaron - 8
Barrage - 7
Valis - 6
Nitewulf - 6
Scribble - 5
Crushed - 2
Iceman - 1