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GAF Dota 2 Hero Creation Contest, Win a Dota 2 beta key

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This contest is pretty simple, design a GAF dota hero, thats a GAF Themed hero.

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Can use any tools you want for example, photoshop, illustrator, mspaint, 3ds max, etc
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Hero needs a fleshed out skill set, does not neccessarly need stats, you can add it if you want

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There will be 3 winners

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Entries until 5pm est Saturday, voting will commence in new thread, and will end Sunday afternoon 5pm est

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Voting will be done by the community

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One submission per person

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One vote per person

This is the submission thread, voting will commence in a separate thread which will be made at 5pm EST Saturday 10/1/11

Please join The DOTA 2 GAF Steam Group
 

Goon Boon

Banned
JohnnyGAF

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Background - JohnnyGAF "Aces" Johnson, a hard-drinking, hard-living gambler who is one not to mess with. With the power of Bookworld steam technology, he augments his natural talents to save world.

Stats
Strength - 18 + 1.5
Agility - 15 + 1.5
Int - 21 +2.5

Melee - Animation will depict JohnnyGAF will slam his fist towards the enemy while holding an playing card (an ace).


Q - Ban Toss
Visual: JohnnyGAF throws five bans (one more than allowed in a standard deck!) at the enemy
Skill Type: Active
Target: Enemy
Damage Type: Magic
Duration: Takes half a second per card (Five cards(Aces)))
Effect: In addition to the damage, each card slows the target for 8% after each toss, for five seconds each.
Cast Range: 600
Mana: 80/90/100/110
Cooldown: 11/9/7/5 Seconds
Damage: 25/35/45/50 Each Card (Ace)
Slow - 4%/5%/6%/7% Each card
Means... - Total Slow of 20%/25%/30%/35%, and since each card is it's own stun, they will gradually regain speed 2.5 seconds after the spell ends.

W - Leave the thread while riding a steamcycle
Visual: A Steamcycle appears, either by fading into the game from a slight distance under JohnnyGAF, or a puff of smoke appears and JohnnyGAF appears on his Steamcycle, due to the Steamcycle's cloaking and JohnnyGAF's fast instincts of speed.
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self
Damage Type: NA
Damage: NA
Duration: Fifteen Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF rides his steam cycle really fast, the steam bike augments his card tosses and beer with steam, giving up his autoattack in exchange for these fantastic powers? Only can get off the bike when he is hit for a certain amount of damage of if he autoattacks an enemy, sending the bike speeding in the direction of an enemy for 150 AoE damage and a 1 second stun.
Cast Range: NA
Mana: 50/70/90/110
Cooldown: 40/32/24/16
Speed boost - 10%/20%/30%/40%
Damage needed - 15%/20%/25%/30%
Effect on Five Aces - Throws aces faster -Changes per card slow to +1%/+2%/+3%/+4%
Effect on Fine Ale - Throws beer faster - Lowers channel time by .35/.70/1.05/1.40 seconds

E -Get drunk and throw a magazine rack like a man, or give said beer to an ally and let him throw the rack
Visual: JohnnyGAF drinks a beer, but the he does not pull the beer out of anywhere, but simply sips from the beer, unless he uses it on an ally, then he throws one from his pocket
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self or Allies
Duration: Five Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF tosses his private brew towards an ally, healing them for a certain amount, but must channel for 2 seconds.
Mana: 105/125/145/165
Cooldown: 30/25/20/15
Amount healed - 235/315/395/475

R - Edit Post
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self/Enemy/Ally
Mana: 155/225/295
Cooldown: 95/70/45
JohnnyGAF activates the time GAF, causing the unit to go back in time a set period of time, regaining 75% of damage taken the first time around, and either saving or dooming them.
Duration - (Three/Four/Five) + .33 seconds for each maxed out ability
 

Spookie

Member
Right GAF. I'll be frank with you. I'm desperate for a DoTA2 key. So listen now as I'm going to completely fucking humiliate myself, so take it easy on me. I’m not very witty, I can’t draw (as you're about to see) but will do anything to get a DoTA2 beta key (even put on silly voices, which I'll no doubt never live down). Please don’t take the abilities too seriously, I know they aren’t really viable but they are more to fit in with the character I’ve created.

DISCLAIMER: The following story is fictional and does not depict any actual person or event. etc

Anyway to the entry, gl hf!

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Cee yoo pee

Lore:

You all know Creepy GAF, it comes in many shapes and forms. Some are friendly and approachable; some may not even know they are a member of Creepy GAF. But they all share the same traits, the ability to repulse people- to make their skin crawl. What was once a myth and a legend of OT has now turned it in to a barren wasteland. The mods tried to quarantine it, they tried to lock it away in Community. Now they looking for pastures green to infect they have slowly infested, like a bad cold, and slithered it’s way in to Gaming.
You see them as you flick through the pickup thread: their disgusting figurines making threads, without warning, suddenly not safe for anyone. Unnecessary pictures of female protagonists strung up in BSDM positions. Using the power of the infected GAF hive mind, the inner circle among them began work on a new type of creeper. Today they unleash their abomination upon the world of DoTA2.

Hero Story:

Born of OT and raised in a basement Cee Yoo Pee was a creature not even Pony GAF could tolerate. The fabled battle between it and evilore go down in the annals of history. It took a ban hammer forged using the rage and fury of 1000 DoTA, HoN and LoL players. Disgraced and perma banned it left GAF seeking revenge on those which had harmed it. Knowing it could not destroy GAF alone it and having no friends to call on. It seeks to forge an anti-hammer capable of repelling evilore and finally getting it’s revenge. Having already dominated HoN & LoL it’s final step is to control DoTA then punish the oppressors.

Role: Debuffer

Affiliation: The Dire (reluctantly)

Stats
Strength - 9 + 0.0001
Agility - 12 + 1.0
Intelligence - 15 + 2.0

Attack Range: 330
Damage: 40 - 45
Armor: 2
Movespeed: 330
Sight Range: 1800/800


Abilities (ed note: I didn’t want to give the character that many DD abilities, I wanted to give it this almost creeping damage model to suit its theme.)


NSFW – Floods marked hero with pictures of Hentai and scantily clad loli figurines with huge breasts. Leaving the target stunned as they try to alt tab out of the window and find something work safe so they aren’t fired by their boss.
Damage: 300/400/500/600
Cooldown (seconds): 10/9/8/7
Mana: 90/100/110/120

Hoverhand – Grips the marked target leaving them unable to escape your supple, glue like grip slowing both your and their movement speed. This skill places a DoT on the Hero.
Damage: 200/300/400/500
Length: 2/3/4/5
Movement speed reduced to: 65%/55%/45%/35%
Cooldown (seconds): 15/13/11/9
Mana: 120/160/200/240

e-stalk – You’ve focused your attentions on a hero and now begin stalking them. This hero is struck with an overwhelming feeling of dread afflicting them with a DoT. While afflicted they will be struck down with Paranoia.
Paranoia: Your peripheral field of view is extended by 25%. But sight outside of that cone is reduced to 15%.
Damage: 300/400/500/600
Length: 3/4/5/6
Cooldown (seconds): 22/20/18/16
Mana: 110/140/170/200

Bailout (Ult) – You cause everyone in a 5m radius to “BAILOUT!.gif” your repeated rambling about what you would do to various jailbait Hollywood girls has now made everyone projectile vomit. All heroes effected will be knocked backwards from you, with the distance increased the closer they are. Anyone walking through the trail of vomit left will be snared eew.
Damage: 400/500/600/700
Dazed (seconds): 2/3/4/5
Movement speed reduced to: 60%/50%/40%/30%
Cooldown (seconds): 200/180/160/140

One liners complete with voiceover:

“Hmm that crystal maiden, I’d like to show her some fan-service!” - Link
“I’m going to BUST you up!” - Link
“Hmm- hey how ar- MOM GOD DAMN IT I TOLD YOU TO KNOCK BEFORE COMING DOWN HERE. DAMN IT.” - Link
“Time to fap.” - Link
“stunned women don’t say no!” - Link
“You’re my WAIFU” - Link
“Shitty Wizard!” - Link
 

x3r0123

Member
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Gamer Gaf-man
Background - Gamer Gaf-man is a gaming enthusiast. He visits gaf frequently for his gaming news and information. He is a natural gaf-man and loves his games.

Stats
Strength - 18 + 2.0
Agility - 18 + 2.0
Intelligence - 18 + 2.0

Attack Range: 330
Affiliation: Gaf
Damage: 40 - 45
Armor: 1
Movespeed: 300
Sight Range: 1800/800

SKILLS

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read latest news - active skill
gamer gaf-man opens the gaming section of gaf. He starts by looking at the latest news. Whenever he finds good news, he becomes excited for a period of time. Additionally, he will store this piece news into his computer. However, if a bad news hits him then he rages and proceeds to create havoc.

What the skill actually does: Looks for the closest and visible enemy hero around x range. If he finds one, he compares his gold with the enemy's gold. If his gold is higher than the enemy's then his attacks and movement speed are increased for a period of time. Additionally he steals gold per second during this period of time.
However, if the enemy's gold is higher than his then he takes additional damage and loses gold for a period of time. Lastly, he will send a nuke damaging everything around it.

General
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Mana: 100/150/200/200
Cooldown: 15/15/20/20 seconds
Cast Range: N/A
Damage Type: Magic
Seek Range: 800
Seek Time: 2 seconds
Effect Duration: 5/6/7/8 seconds
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Good news
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Increase attack speed: 15/20/25/30%
Increase movement speed: 10/20/30/40 MS
Gold per second: 100/125/150/175 Gold
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Bad news:
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Additional Damage: 40%
Nuke Damage: 100/200/300/400
Nuke Radius: 600
Gold per Second: 25/35/50/75 Gold
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insertjpg - active skill
gamer gaf-man cannot express himself with words. As a result, he throws an image file to the enemy. Depending on the current highest attribute point, there will be different effects. If all the stats are the same then the intelligence effect will be selected.

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Strength: stuns the target for 1/1.5/2/2.5 seconds
Agility: slows the target by 10/20/25/30%
Intelligence: nukes the target for 200/300/400/500 damage
Damage Type: Magic
Cast Range: 600
Mana: 125/150/175/225
Cooldown: 10/15/20/25 seconds
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buy games - passive skill
gamer gaf-man loves to buy games specially when he has a deep wallet. Each time he buys a game (kills a creep/hero), his energy (attack damage and speed) decreases for a period of time. Also, he gains buying speed (Movement Speed) from buying games. Gamer gaf-man can only buy a number of games because of his wallet (Up to x kills). After a period of time, he can buy games again (has not killed anything).

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Duration: 10 seconds
Reset Time: 10 seconds
Decreased Attack Damage: N x 1% (so, if hero kills 10 kills, his damage is reduced by 10%)
Decreased Attack Speed: N x 2.2%
Increased Movement Speed: N x 2.3%
Maximum games(kill): 10/12/15/18
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hype train - ult - active skill
whenever a big conference occurs, gamer gaf-man becomes a train that hypes (increased movement speed and hp regen) and drags everything around it(units,heroes) for a period of time. Once the big event ends, gamer gaf-man becomes disappointed and stuns himself only followed by an aoe slow (he gets affected too). Nearby units will be slowed as well.

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Duration: 5/6/8 seconds
Increased hp regen: 50/75/100% of base regen
Increased Movement Speed: 100/150/200 (or 522 if over)
Stun: 7/10/15 seconds
slow: 2 seconds by 25%
slow radius: 500
Damage Type: Magic
Cast Range: N/A
Mana: 250/300/350
Cooldown: 90 seconds
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kingslunk

Member
The Red Gaffer

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About:
The Red Gaffer also known as the mods and admins to the people of NeoGaf, it is the one hero that all other heroes respect. They remain cautiously and realize no matter how much they think their trust level or how much of a friendship the other heroes think they might have developed with the red gaffer one cannot ever be sure on which side he'll strike. One minute he's your friend the next he's annoyed and taking his frustration out on you. Few have dared to stand up to the red gaffer but this has only resulted in their extermination from the city of Gaf.

Stats
Strength - 20
Agility - 18
Intelligence - 18

Attack Range: 10000
Affiliation: Gaf
Damage: 1 - 3000
Armor: 10
Movespeed: 1000
Sight Range: 1800/800

General
The Red Gaffer is a rage based character, however unlike other rage mechanics in other games the rage bar starts off green and progresses to yellow and then finally red. When the rage bar is green the red gaffer's abilities are primarily support and healing. When the bar is yellow the red gaffer's abilities change from healing and support to damage and support. When the red gaffer's abilities turn red all hell breaks loose and he begins a DPSing angry machine. Watch out. He won't stop until at least one hero is dead. As he uses skils his rage depletes, the healing and support moves slowly grow and he automatically regenerates rage when idle but at a very slow rate.
Rage: 0-200 (Green) 200-400(Yellow) 400-2000 (Red)


Moveset

General Attack:
The general red gaffers main weapon of choice is the hammer. The way he uses his hammer to attack varies depending on when rage color he is in. When it green he is a melee hero using the hammer to claw his enemies down. When yellow he is a ranged hero throwing his hammer at anyone who defies him. When he is red his moves are both melee and ranged shooting mini hammers while he swings his main hammer on his enemy.

Moves:
Q
Forum Moderation: Buff/Debuff move.
Cooldown: 20/15/10/5 seconds
Cast Range: N/A
Damage Type: Magic
Effect Duration: Instant
Green: Buff Friendly Hero giving % hp (varies on level)
Yellow: Debuff Enemy Hero removing % hp (varies on level)
Red: Buffs and Debuffs Enemy hero while creating a heal over time on friendly and damage over time on enemy. % based on level.
Duration: 5/10/15/15

W
Thread Closer: Healing->Damage move
Cooldown: 20/15/10/5 seconds
Cast Range: Varies on rage color (green/yellow/red)
Damage Type: Magic
Effect Duration: Instant
Green: Heals friendly hero % based on Gaffer's level.
Yellow: Damages enemy hero % based on Gaffer's level.
Red: AOE Heal/Damage for all heroes around (heal friendly damage enemy).

E
Ban/Unban: Stick/Unsticks Heroes
Cooldown: 20/15/10/5 seconds
Cast Range: Varies on rage color (green/yellow/red)
Damage Type: Magic
Effect Duration: Instant
Green: Removes all disabling effects from enemy heroes.
Yellow: Sticks an enemy in place for 5/10/10/15 seconds.
Red: Sticks all enemy heroes in place for 5 seconds, allows extra damage done from friendly heroes on the stuck heroes.

R
Forum Closer: Damage - Ultimate attack "closes the forum down" instantly kills all enemy heroes and heals all friendly heroes can only be used once per game.
Cooldown: Once per game
Cast Range: Varies on rage color (green/yellow/red)
Damage Type: Magic
Effect Duration: Instant
Red Only (Red Gaffer also must be max level): Kills all enemy heroes and heals all friendly heroes can only be used once per game.
 
FlightOfHeaven said:
Um, just use GAF man. It writes itself.

Thread Starter: GAF-Man begins a chain of attacks (posts). He flashes around the field, striking up to 5 targets. He gets a partial mana refund of 15 per target struck. Can strike one target up to three times, prioritizes heroes, does not apply on hit effects.

Damage: 40/60/80/100/120
Cost: 100 mana
Range (Melee)
Cooldown: 20/17/14/11/8

Rage: GAF-Man is outraged by retail practices, and proceeds to push over a magazine rack to voice his displeasure. He stuns everything in a cone (AoE) in front of him for .50/.75/1.0/1.5/2.0 seconds and deals 50/100/150/200/250 damage. Stun and damage are distributed amongst heroes caught in the magazine rack, down to a minimum of .50/.50/.75/.75/1.0/1.25 and 25/50/75/100/125 per hero.

Damage: 50/100/150/200/250
Stun: .50/.75/1.0/1.5/2.0
Cost: 70/80/90/100/115
Range: 450 (cone)
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Post History: GAF-Man knows what stupid things you've done, and doesn't hesitate to dreg up your past actions for all to see. GAF-Man reveals all enemy heroes who have taken damage in the last 3/4/5/6/7 seconds for 3/4/5/6/7 seconds and deals 150/175/200/225/250 damage + 15%/17.5%/20%/22.5%/25% additional damage based on the damage taken in the last 3/4/5/6/7 seconds.

Damage: 150/175/200/225/250 + 15%/17.5%/20%/22.5%/25% additional damage
Cost: 120/115/110/105/100 mana
Range 1500
Cooldown: 22/20/18/16/13
Additional Effect: Reveals enemy heroes in the fog of war if they have taken damage in the previous 3/4/5/6/7 seconds for an additional 3/4/5/6/7 seconds. Reveals stealthed heroes.

Ban Hammer: GAF-Man has had it up to here with your "subtle" trolling. GAF-Man slams his great hammer on a single target for 300/500/700 damage and silences them for 4/5/6 seconds. If the target dies and there are other enemy heroes within 700/800/900 distance, then they are silenced for 3/4/5 seconds if their health is above 50% and feared for 2/3/4 seconds if their health is below 50%.

Damage: 300/500/700
Silence: 4/5/6 (main target) ; 3/4/5 (auxiliary targets if health >50%)
Fear: 2/3/4 seconds (auxiliary targets if health <50%)
Range: Melee (main target) ; 700/800/900 (auxiliary targets)


Well, fuck, I think the GAF-Man thread had the best GAF-Man images. How the hell am I to compete?
 

Joe Molotov

Member
Goon Boon said:
JohnnyGAF

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Background - JohnnyGAF "Aces" Johnson, a hard-drinking, hard-living gambler who is one not to mess with. With the power of Bookworld steam technology, he augments his natural talents to save world.

Stats
Strength - 18 + 1.5
Agility - 15 + 1.5
Int - 21 +2.5

Melee - Animation will depict JohnnyGAF will slam his fist towards the enemy while holding an playing card (an ace).


Q - Ban Toss
Visual: JohnnyGAF throws five bans (one more than allowed in a standard deck!) at the enemy
Skill Type: Active
Target: Enemy
Damage Type: Magic
Duration: Takes half a second per card (Five cards(Aces)))
Effect: In addition to the damage, each card slows the target for 8% after each toss, for five seconds each.
Cast Range: 600
Mana: 80/90/100/110
Cooldown: 11/9/7/5 Seconds
Damage: 25/35/45/50 Each Card (Ace)
Slow - 4%/5%/6%/7% Each card
Means... - Total Slow of 20%/25%/30%/35%, and since each card is it's own stun, they will gradually regain speed 2.5 seconds after the spell ends.

W - Leave the thread while riding a steamcycle
Visual: A Steamcycle appears, either by fading into the game from a slight distance under JohnnyGAF, or a puff of smoke appears and JohnnyGAF appears on his Steamcycle, due to the Steamcycle's cloaking and JohnnyGAF's fast instincts of speed.
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self
Damage Type: NA
Damage: NA
Duration: Fifteen Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF rides his steam cycle really fast, the steam bike augments his card tosses and beer with steam, giving up his autoattack in exchange for these fantastic powers? Only can get off the bike when he is hit for a certain amount of damage of if he autoattacks an enemy, sending the bike speeding in the direction of an enemy for 150 AoE damage and a 1 second stun.
Cast Range: NA
Mana: 50/70/90/110
Cooldown: 40/32/24/16
Speed boost - 10%/20%/30%/40%
Damage needed - 15%/20%/25%/30%
Effect on Five Aces - Throws aces faster -Changes per card slow to +1%/+2%/+3%/+4%
Effect on Fine Ale - Throws beer faster - Lowers channel time by .35/.70/1.05/1.40 seconds

E -Get drunk and throw a magazine rack like a man, or give said beer to an ally and let him throw the rack
Visual: JohnnyGAF drinks a beer, but the he does not pull the beer out of anywhere, but simply sips from the beer, unless he uses it on an ally, then he throws one from his pocket
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self or Allies
Duration: Five Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF tosses his private brew towards an ally, healing them for a certain amount, but must channel for 2 seconds.
Mana: 105/125/145/165
Cooldown: 30/25/20/15
Amount healed - 235/315/395/475

R - Edit Post
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self/Enemy/Ally
Mana: 155/225/295
Cooldown: 95/70/45
JohnnyGAF activates the time GAF, causing the unit to go back in time a set period of time, regaining 75% of damage taken the first time around, and either saving or dooming them.
Duration - (Three/Four/Five) + .33 seconds for each maxed out ability

Thumbs up!
 

Guesong

Member
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Detective Gafstan
Ganker/Support/Initiator hero.
Agility Hero
300 Attack Range (throws his box)

Lore : A loving father in a family of 5, Gustav Gafstan was troubled when his two sons and his little girl went missing one day. It shouldn't have surprised him, though ; he had been investigating a case of a mythical battle between good and evil, eternally retold, and was told by his boss to drop it and that he was a lunatic. Only, he was right, and his persistance led to this kidnapping.

He didn't care one bit about all the Radiant or Dire mumbo jumbo ; all that mattered was the clue of an informant, telling him that his children were to be sacrifices to the Great Old God if the Dire succeeded. Without second thought, he kissed his wife, picked up his trusty box of tools and went to get back his children so that one day, he can go back home and be a family man again.

Skill 1 : Trace
900 cast range
125 mana
30 seconds cooldown
Target Enemy Unit

"There was once this fellow named Kato..."

Detective Gafstan is one of the best in his business. Countless years and adventures has made him quite an expert at finding things that would have stayed hidden otherwise.

When activated, grants Detective Gafstan stealth (with 3 second fadetime) for 10/20/30/40 seconds, increased movement speed (3/6/9/12 %) and gains truesight. Target enemy unit is revealed and has truesight around him, revealing invisible enemy units.

Skill 2 : For or Against
100 cast range
50 mana
5 seconds cooldown
Target Enemy or Friendly Unit

"Against."

Detective Gafstan earned his reputation of being relentless in his pursuit, yet people seldom mention the care and support he has given to his coworkers over the years.

If used on target enemy, deals 75/125/175/225 physical damage and apply a mini-stun.

If used on target ally, increase target movement and attack speed by 3/6/9/12 % for 10 seconds.

Cannot be used on himself.

Skill 3 : Expertise
Passive

"You really shouldn't do that. Trust me. I'm an expert."

Passively give Detective Gafstan an extra 15/20/25/30 of clearvision around himself and his target per level of Trace.

Passively reduce the cooldown of For or Against by 1/2/3/4 seconds.

Passively gives an extra 50 attack range and 5 % base attack to Detective Gafstan per level in Expertise.

Ultimate : Long Arm of the Law
99999 cast range.
200 mana
150/135/120 seconds cooldown

"It does look quite a bit like a hammer."

Reveals the map for 1/2/3 seconds. Detective Gafstan unleash a Long Arm of the Law for each enemy hero revealed that way, each heading toward one.

The Long Arm of the Law moves with 300/425/550 movement speed and gains 20/40/60 movement speed per second while moving in revealed territory. Lose 35/70/105 movement speed by second when moving through non-revealed territory. The Long Arm of the Law disappears if its movement speed reaches 0.

On contact with enemy hero unit, deals 300/450/600 damage to it, apply a 15/20/25 % movement speed debuff and reveals it for 10/15/20 seconds on the minimap.
 

Weenerz

Banned
Goon Boon said:
JohnnyGAF

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Background - JohnnyGAF "Aces" Johnson, a hard-drinking, hard-living gambler who is one not to mess with. With the power of Bookworld steam technology, he augments his natural talents to save world.

Stats
Strength - 18 + 1.5
Agility - 15 + 1.5
Int - 21 +2.5

Melee - Animation will depict JohnnyGAF will slam his fist towards the enemy while holding an playing card (an ace).


Q - Ban Toss
Visual: JohnnyGAF throws five bans (one more than allowed in a standard deck!) at the enemy
Skill Type: Active
Target: Enemy
Damage Type: Magic
Duration: Takes half a second per card (Five cards(Aces)))
Effect: In addition to the damage, each card slows the target for 8% after each toss, for five seconds each.
Cast Range: 600
Mana: 80/90/100/110
Cooldown: 11/9/7/5 Seconds
Damage: 25/35/45/50 Each Card (Ace)
Slow - 4%/5%/6%/7% Each card
Means... - Total Slow of 20%/25%/30%/35%, and since each card is it's own stun, they will gradually regain speed 2.5 seconds after the spell ends.

W - Leave the thread while riding a steamcycle
Visual: A Steamcycle appears, either by fading into the game from a slight distance under JohnnyGAF, or a puff of smoke appears and JohnnyGAF appears on his Steamcycle, due to the Steamcycle's cloaking and JohnnyGAF's fast instincts of speed.
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self
Damage Type: NA
Damage: NA
Duration: Fifteen Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF rides his steam cycle really fast, the steam bike augments his card tosses and beer with steam, giving up his autoattack in exchange for these fantastic powers? Only can get off the bike when he is hit for a certain amount of damage of if he autoattacks an enemy, sending the bike speeding in the direction of an enemy for 150 AoE damage and a 1 second stun.
Cast Range: NA
Mana: 50/70/90/110
Cooldown: 40/32/24/16
Speed boost - 10%/20%/30%/40%
Damage needed - 15%/20%/25%/30%
Effect on Five Aces - Throws aces faster -Changes per card slow to +1%/+2%/+3%/+4%
Effect on Fine Ale - Throws beer faster - Lowers channel time by .35/.70/1.05/1.40 seconds

E -Get drunk and throw a magazine rack like a man, or give said beer to an ally and let him throw the rack
Visual: JohnnyGAF drinks a beer, but the he does not pull the beer out of anywhere, but simply sips from the beer, unless he uses it on an ally, then he throws one from his pocket
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self or Allies
Duration: Five Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF tosses his private brew towards an ally, healing them for a certain amount, but must channel for 2 seconds.
Mana: 105/125/145/165
Cooldown: 30/25/20/15
Amount healed - 235/315/395/475

R - Edit Post
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self/Enemy/Ally
Mana: 155/225/295
Cooldown: 95/70/45
JohnnyGAF activates the time GAF, causing the unit to go back in time a set period of time, regaining 75% of damage taken the first time around, and either saving or dooming them.
Duration - (Three/Four/Five) + .33 seconds for each maxed out ability



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Kapura

Banned
Ancient Construct
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come at me bro

Fuckin', the NeoGAF servers came to life! and they want revenge on all the fools who only used GAF to post in the leaked celebrity nudes thread! They've become an intelligent collective forming a body known as... the ancient Construct.

STR: 22 (+2.5)
INT: 16 (+1.7)
AGI: 17 (+1.4)
290 MS

Skill 1: Ban
Mana cost: 150
Cooldown: 15
Range: 600

The construct launches a projectile at a target enemy, stunning it for 2 seconds. Every enemy unit touched by the flying projectile in a 150 unit radius takes 100/150/200/250 magic damage
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Skill 2: Explosive Bolts
Mana cost: 80
Cooldown: 50/40/30/20

The construct blows off unneccesary armour in order to move faster
Deals 100 magic damage to enemies in a 400 radius.
For (4/5/6/7) seconds, the construct gains 80 MS, and takes (40%/30%/20%/10%) more damage.
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Skill 3: Repairing 502 Errors (aka OH NOES HIS NANOMACHINES)
Passive

If the construct has under (15%/25%/35%/45%) health, he gains 4/6/8/10 health regeneration per second.
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Ultimate: Net Warp
Mana cost: 100/175/250
Cooldown: 60/40/20
Range: 800/900/1000

Blinks to target location, dealing (100/250/400) magic damage and applying a (40%/50%/60%) slow in a 350 unit radius.

In the first second after the blink, the construct is in a Warp State. During this time his first two skills are disabled and he is disarmed and cannot use items, but he can hit the ultimate again and return to his starting position for an additional 50 mana.

Aghanim's Scepter: Warp state no longer silences, disarms, or prevents item use; ability to warp back to starting position lasts 2 seconds instead of 1.
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Card Boy

Banned
I hope this isn't too OP. Imagine the pic has a hammer

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The Man in Red

Strength hero
22 Agi 18 Intl 13
Jungler/Ganker
Attack Type: Melee


Q - Mighty Hammer
Skill Type: Activation
Damage Type: Physical
Radius: 250
Range: 650 / 700 / 850 / 1100
Target: Enemies
Mana: 100 / 110 / 120 / 130
Cooldown: 15 seconds
Activation: Throws Hammer in a straight line with great might damaging enemies for 120 / 160 / 240 / 300 Physical Damage while stunning the intial enemy for 0.5/1/1.5/2 seconds and half that for enemies after.
Required Level: 1 / 3 / 5 / 7

W - Collaboration

Skill Type: Summon Controllable Ally
Cast time: 1.5 seconds
Target: Enemies
Mana: 200
Cooldown: 90 seconds
Activation: Summons another mod with 500 / 650 / 800 / 1000 Health, that deals 20 / 35 / 45 / 60 Physical Damage per attack, and have an attack cooldown time of 2 seconds. Summoned Mod can carry items.
Required Level: 1 / 3 / 5 / 7


E - Ravage
Skill Type: Passive
Target: Self
Mana: None
Cooldown: 1 second
Activation: Eats away at his enemies for 7%/ 10% / 12% / 15% life-steal. Killing an enemy unit instantly grants The Mod 20/30/50/100 health upon death
Duration - Always
Required Level: 1 / 3 / 5 / 7


R - Iron Will (Ultimate)
Skill Type: Passive
Radius 600
Target: Self/Allies/Enemies
Mana: None
Cooldown: 1 second
Activation: Shields himself and allies with 1/2/3/5 with Armour while terrifying his enemies for 10/20/30/50 damage per second
Duration - Always
Required Level: 6 / 11 / 16
 

KrayzeeGloo

Neo Member
Goon Boon said:
JohnnyGAF

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Background - JohnnyGAF "Aces" Johnson, a hard-drinking, hard-living gambler who is one not to mess with. With the power of Bookworld steam technology, he augments his natural talents to save world.

Stats
Strength - 18 + 1.5
Agility - 15 + 1.5
Int - 21 +2.5

Melee - Animation will depict JohnnyGAF will slam his fist towards the enemy while holding an playing card (an ace).


Q - Ban Toss
Visual: JohnnyGAF throws five bans (one more than allowed in a standard deck!) at the enemy
Skill Type: Active
Target: Enemy
Damage Type: Magic
Duration: Takes half a second per card (Five cards(Aces)))
Effect: In addition to the damage, each card slows the target for 8% after each toss, for five seconds each.
Cast Range: 600
Mana: 80/90/100/110
Cooldown: 11/9/7/5 Seconds
Damage: 25/35/45/50 Each Card (Ace)
Slow - 4%/5%/6%/7% Each card
Means... - Total Slow of 20%/25%/30%/35%, and since each card is it's own stun, they will gradually regain speed 2.5 seconds after the spell ends.

W - Leave the thread while riding a steamcycle
Visual: A Steamcycle appears, either by fading into the game from a slight distance under JohnnyGAF, or a puff of smoke appears and JohnnyGAF appears on his Steamcycle, due to the Steamcycle's cloaking and JohnnyGAF's fast instincts of speed.
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self
Damage Type: NA
Damage: NA
Duration: Fifteen Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF rides his steam cycle really fast, the steam bike augments his card tosses and beer with steam, giving up his autoattack in exchange for these fantastic powers? Only can get off the bike when he is hit for a certain amount of damage of if he autoattacks an enemy, sending the bike speeding in the direction of an enemy for 150 AoE damage and a 1 second stun.
Cast Range: NA
Mana: 50/70/90/110
Cooldown: 40/32/24/16
Speed boost - 10%/20%/30%/40%
Damage needed - 15%/20%/25%/30%
Effect on Five Aces - Throws aces faster -Changes per card slow to +1%/+2%/+3%/+4%
Effect on Fine Ale - Throws beer faster - Lowers channel time by .35/.70/1.05/1.40 seconds

E -Get drunk and throw a magazine rack like a man, or give said beer to an ally and let him throw the rack
Visual: JohnnyGAF drinks a beer, but the he does not pull the beer out of anywhere, but simply sips from the beer, unless he uses it on an ally, then he throws one from his pocket
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self or Allies
Duration: Five Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF tosses his private brew towards an ally, healing them for a certain amount, but must channel for 2 seconds.
Mana: 105/125/145/165
Cooldown: 30/25/20/15
Amount healed - 235/315/395/475

R - Edit Post
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self/Enemy/Ally
Mana: 155/225/295
Cooldown: 95/70/45
JohnnyGAF activates the time GAF, causing the unit to go back in time a set period of time, regaining 75% of damage taken the first time around, and either saving or dooming them.
Duration - (Three/Four/Five) + .33 seconds for each maxed out ability

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Hellwowwa

Agility Hero

Skills

Q - Flaming Shuffle
Grants movement speed buff for 5secs
8 / 12 / 16 / 20 %

W - Hell glare
Slows enemy attack and moment speed % for 3secs when facing, slow reduction reduced by 50% if the enemy hero is facing away

E - Play dead
Absorbs 50% of damage taken in next 2secs (canceled if u attack), returning 18 / 22 / 24 / 28 % if auto attack is used in next 5.

R - flaming Mop
Hellwowa throws itself at the enemy and slides along the floor at range of 1000, Burning all creeps along the way, if connects with a hero, the hero sustains fire damage and % of health every bite over then 3 sec duration.
 

Forkball

Member
Swirling Specter
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Background - From the hidden transportalian dimension of Sw'kr, Swirling Specter is an amalgam of the souls of the men who died during the War of the Ancient Elders of Oldingor. Swirling Specter harnessed the power of the Skilteingrga Staff to open up the Gate of Le'Mu-nateipolis to obtain even more magical essence from the ancient gods, known as the Kwerer.

Stats
Strength - 13, increased per rotation
Agility - 25 + 1 per swirl
Intelligence - Variable, all players must take a brief quiz before selecting the character
Dexterity - No one cares about this stat
Special Defense: 298
Type: Ghost/Flying

Attack Range: 12 shaftments
Damage: 13.8 SPS (swirls per second)
Armor: 0 (they're fucking swirls)
Movespeed: 19.7 meters
Sight Range: Transdimensional
Weight: Light
Class: Calculator

SKILLS

Q - Twirling Terror
SS traps the enemy in a dryereseque spin, causing them to seriously sit the fuck down for a few minutes so they don't get nauseous.
Skill Type: Active
Target: Anyone dumb enough to get trapped
Damage Type: Class 3
Duration: 4 parsecs
Effect: Enemies have to eat a banana to get their potassium levels back to normal
Cast Range: 75 degrees
Mana: 10% of enemy's level
- No critical hits

W - Uzumaki
Does double damage against heroes with shoehorned Asian names (Rikimaru, Chen)
Skill Type: Lazy
Target: Baka Gaijin
Damage Type: Uguu~
According to Keikaku: Affirmative

E -MEDIC!
Call for Medic
Skill Type: Annoying
Target: Self
Duration: Can spam once per .8 seconds
Amount Healed: Depends on loadout

R - Reload
Reload Swirls
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self
Hotdown: -50

B+Down - Pick Pikmin
SS summons Pikmin, which can be consume for health or just for the hell of it
Cooldown: 5sec for Purple, 2sec for Red
DLC: $2.99
 

SeigO

Banned
I wish I was more creative and witty this is the only thing I could think up at the moment. This is all in good humor.

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Feminazi

Background - Drag "FemiNazi" Ona is a human female, woman's right activist. She was dethroned from her position of power and she's back to take her revenge on male heroes.
All of Feminazi's skill are intended to be used on male heroes, all damage caused by her skills will be scaled down to 75% effectiveness on female heroes.

Stats
Strength - 15 + 1.7
Agility - 16 + 2.1
Int - 21 + 2.5

Ranged - Her attack animation will consist of her throwing stretch arm strong dolls. Because they can stretch into next week.
Range- 600

Q - Inconsistent Punishment
Skill Type: Activation
Damage Type: Magical
Range: 600
Target: Enemies
Mana: 80/100/120/140
Cooldown: 15 seconds
Activation: Cycles between three different punishment cards at random. A card will automatically be picked after two seconds. Hitting Q a second time will blindly stop the cycling to pick a card instantly. Because of Feminazi's irrational behavior and personality she is unable to just pick a card.
#1 The "three day" ban card will add 70/80/90/100 damage to your next auto attack + a 30% slow lasting for 2.5s.
#2 The "month long" ban card will add 120/130/140/150 damage to your next auto attack + a 1s stun.
#3 The "perma ban" card will add 225/250/275/300 damage to your next auto attack.

W - Bitterness
Skill Type: Passive
Target: Self
Mana:40
Cooldown: 25s
Duration: Always
Activation- FemiNazi channels her bitterness into a focused state increasing her attack speed by 35/40/45/50% for 6 seconds.
Passive: Any male hero that dies within a 1000 radius will lose 1 "e-peen" that is transferred to and stored by FemiNazi. (which includes 1 damage, and one random base stat point)

E - Man Hate
Skill Type: Activation
Target: Enemies
Mana: 100/120/140/150
Cooldown: 30 seconds
Range: 650
Activation: Feminazi can psychically make male heroes fear punishment and feel guilty about their chauvinism. When activated the selected enemy hero will be sheeped and silenced for 1.5/2/2.5/3 seconds
Required Level: 1 / 3 / 5 / 7


R - Female Driver (Ultimate)
Skill Type: Active
Range- 1000
Target: Enemies/Allies
Mana: 150/250/300
Damage- Magic
Cooldown: 100 seconds
Activation: Feminazi's most terrifying skill is feared by everyone on the battlefield allies included. The Female Driver skill will summon a car driven by a female from behind herself and it can hit any target it collides with. It is a high risk skill that is highly unpredictable. It only goes forward and it will crash into the first target that it sees, it stuns everything in a 300 radius of it's target for 2 seconds dealing 250/350/450 damage in it's radius.
Required Level: 6 / 11 / 16
 
Goon Boon said:
JohnnyGAF

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Background - JohnnyGAF "Aces" Johnson, a hard-drinking, hard-living gambler who is one not to mess with. With the power of Bookworld steam technology, he augments his natural talents to save world.

Stats
Strength - 18 + 1.5
Agility - 15 + 1.5
Int - 21 +2.5

Melee - Animation will depict JohnnyGAF will slam his fist towards the enemy while holding an playing card (an ace).


Q - Ban Toss
Visual: JohnnyGAF throws five bans (one more than allowed in a standard deck!) at the enemy
Skill Type: Active
Target: Enemy
Damage Type: Magic
Duration: Takes half a second per card (Five cards(Aces)))
Effect: In addition to the damage, each card slows the target for 8% after each toss, for five seconds each.
Cast Range: 600
Mana: 80/90/100/110
Cooldown: 11/9/7/5 Seconds
Damage: 25/35/45/50 Each Card (Ace)
Slow - 4%/5%/6%/7% Each card
Means... - Total Slow of 20%/25%/30%/35%, and since each card is it's own stun, they will gradually regain speed 2.5 seconds after the spell ends.

W - Leave the thread while riding a steamcycle
Visual: A Steamcycle appears, either by fading into the game from a slight distance under JohnnyGAF, or a puff of smoke appears and JohnnyGAF appears on his Steamcycle, due to the Steamcycle's cloaking and JohnnyGAF's fast instincts of speed.
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self
Damage Type: NA
Damage: NA
Duration: Fifteen Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF rides his steam cycle really fast, the steam bike augments his card tosses and beer with steam, giving up his autoattack in exchange for these fantastic powers? Only can get off the bike when he is hit for a certain amount of damage of if he autoattacks an enemy, sending the bike speeding in the direction of an enemy for 150 AoE damage and a 1 second stun.
Cast Range: NA
Mana: 50/70/90/110
Cooldown: 40/32/24/16
Speed boost - 10%/20%/30%/40%
Damage needed - 15%/20%/25%/30%
Effect on Five Aces - Throws aces faster -Changes per card slow to +1%/+2%/+3%/+4%
Effect on Fine Ale - Throws beer faster - Lowers channel time by .35/.70/1.05/1.40 seconds

E -Get drunk and throw a magazine rack like a man, or give said beer to an ally and let him throw the rack
Visual: JohnnyGAF drinks a beer, but the he does not pull the beer out of anywhere, but simply sips from the beer, unless he uses it on an ally, then he throws one from his pocket
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self or Allies
Duration: Five Seconds
Effect - JohnnyGAF tosses his private brew towards an ally, healing them for a certain amount, but must channel for 2 seconds.
Mana: 105/125/145/165
Cooldown: 30/25/20/15
Amount healed - 235/315/395/475

R - Edit Post
Skill Type: Active
Target: Self/Enemy/Ally
Mana: 155/225/295
Cooldown: 95/70/45
JohnnyGAF activates the time GAF, causing the unit to go back in time a set period of time, regaining 75% of damage taken the first time around, and either saving or dooming them.
Duration - (Three/Four/Five) + .33 seconds for each maxed out ability

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GAFFER
(German word for gaper, gawper)
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Dota 2 Lore:
GAFFER is a creepy guy with a very bizarre hobby. He gapes/gawps people to molests them and make them feel unsure.

Stats:
Strength - He has enough strength to hold his binoculars (5)
Agility - 30
Int - 20
Attack Range: 900
Damage: Depends on the psychological state of his enemy. Usually 60
Armor: A trench coate does not protect you at all...

Ranged Supporter very OP

Basic attack - GAFFER gazes at his enemie to give him psychological damage.

Skills:
Q - Concentrated Gaze 50/60/70/80 mana; 10/8/6/5 second cooldown
GAFFER gazes at his enemy through his binoculars from 600 range to give him psychological damage plus additional stats reduction (70%) for 5 seconds.

W - Molest 70/90/120/150 mana; 15/9/7/6,5 second cooldown
GAFFER molests his enemy from a 550 range by looking through his binoculars. This causes the enemy to feel unsure whether he likes it or not and he back off to the nearest tower and stays there for a 3 seconds, not being able to do something.

E - Trench Coat 100/130/150/180 mana; 20/15/12/10 second cooldown
GAFFER (who is naked under his trench coat btw..) opens his trench which causes every enemy in 450 range to gaze at him and be confused for 3 seconds.

R - Ultimate Gaze150/200/250/300 mana; 90/75/70/65 second cooldown
GAFFER puts down his binoculars to look into his enemies eyes from a 1500 range to stun them for 6 seconds and make them cry like a baby.

Recommended Items:
Swarovski's Swarovision (the best binoculars in the world?)
Black Leather Trenchcoat by Dolce & Gabbana

GAFFER Skill Build:
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Recon

Banned
Gaf Hero Spotlight!

The Wollans!


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Hero Back story:In a forgotten thread this hero was born. An event, so crazy, that it ripped a hole in time itself. Bringing forth The Wollans, the Rainbow Wire frame gang. They fight for the Radiant, but party with the Dire.

Primary Role:Ganker

Hero Roles:From the shadows the Wollans spring forth. Depending on the role the Wollans take, they can either slow, mana burn, or damage. Once the wollans are on an enemy hero, that hero is silenced for the duration of the skill. With his invisibility, he can stalk his prey easily. For his Ultimate, he gains a new Wollan at every level.

Skills

FHUTA

The Wollans spring into action, pouncing on and silencing enemy hero, depending on what Wollan is activated, does a slow, Mana burn, or damage over time. While the Wollan is on target hero, he is invulnerable. Duration 4 seconds. If Green Wollan is selected, does 25/50/75/100 damage a second. If Red Wollan selected, slows . Blue Wollan burns 50/75/100/125 mana a second. Yellow Wollan is the only Wollan that can target a friendly hero. If a friendly hero has Yellow Wollan on him, he he gains +15/20/25/20 Movement speed and takes 5/10/15/20 damage a second. After the 4 second duration, Wollan gets tired and leaves.

Mana Cost: 60/75/90/105



Surprise!

Targets self for a 3/6/9/12 seconds of invisibility.

Mana Cost: 50/70/90/100



Interchangeable Love

Selects what Wollan you want to be active.


Call to Frame

Wollan starts off just by his red self. At level 1 of the ulti, he gains his friend, the Green Wollan. At level 2, he gains the Blue Wollan. At Level 3 he gains the Yellow Wollan.


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King Boo

Member
I haven't thought up of a name or design. Maybe the hero should be somewhat overweight, slightly green, and just plain ugly. But he holds a pretty cool looking rifle (steam powered of course), and is duel wielding another rifle on his off hand. I'll try to think more about how it should look. the colors orange and black, with some white here and there should be present.

Anyway i was thinking that the hero itself could be made into a high dps character, or a poor man's tank, or a jack of trades/hybrid of both. it's naturally ranged, but the range shouldn't be that great. the lore i'm not too sure about, but you can piece it up together when i describe the skills. I'll try to think more about it later. anyway i hope you guys like it

Q: Dilated Trollkines: This neogaf is a mere subhuman. His father a 40 yo hardcore gamer who donated seed, and his mother, an ugly troll took in the seed. thanks to this dangerous genetic combo, the neogaf creature has some troll regeneration, and can enhance his regeneration every time he spends his mana on mundane things. So putting points in this skill will passively increase health regeneration. And for X amount of energy spent, Y amount of health is restored instantly.

W: Streamlined Battle Focus: Afraid of computer g....I mean amazed by inferior elven wooden gaming devices, the neogaf creature adopts a specific kind of mindset matching his device. For every couple of normal attacks performed, his next attack has some STOPPING POWER/will perform more damage. But wait, there is more! He also DOUBLE TAP his weapon, pulling off TWO ATTACKS INSTEAD OF ONE. Amazing. Finally he gains a very small amount of health (maybe like 50) after this is done. This passive has a small cooldown of course. Even this kind of thinking is just too much for this gaffer.

E: Hardcoring No Scoper: The gaffer follows strict, self imposed rules to make fighting more cooler, and hardcore. Yet he insists on using a very powerful sniper rifle since it takes tremendous amount of skill to use. The rifle fires a penetrating shot that...penetrates anyone caught in the shot's path. It has a very short cooldown, and does decent damage. However the shot, even if it "hit" has a chance of missing/not doing any damage to target. Every time a shot is made, the gaffer takes 15% to 30% more damage than normal for X seconds (time can stack). The shot itself has a small charge up time, so other players can dodge it if they see the animation. Still I want this skill to be somewhat spammable, so if a shot does do damage, shorten the cooldown for the next attack.

R: LA BOUNCING BOMBA: The neogaf user explodes with terrifying rage when he finds out the items he has purchased goes on sale at a General Store called Frozen Faucet. He will perform X amount of jumps into the air, and performs a buttslam as he lands. Every time he lands, an explosion occurs. Each one bigger than the last one, with a greater radius than before. Anyone caught in the explosion is dealt damage based on a percentage on how much the player has spent on items + a basic Z damage (in case the player hasn't spent much).
 
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Deleted member 74300

Unconfirmed Member
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"The Banned One"

Once a living troll that annoyed the kingdom of Neogaf. He was executed for breaking many of the rules. Now he seeks revenge for what they have done to him and attempts to return to the kingdom of Neogaf to continue his harassment of innocent people for his own sick and twisted amusement.

Alternate Account.

Creates a duplicate image of the hero. The image's attack does no damage but last until destroyed.

Rank 1 - 1 Image maximum
Rank 2 - 2 Images maximum
Rank 3 - 3 Images maximum

Mana Cost 40/60/80/100


Late to The Party.

Slows down enemy movement speed for a few seconds.
120/140/160/180

Revival of Slain Trolls

Summons trolls who were banned to do your bidding. Causes creeps to only attack them due to their taunting.

Rage Inducer

Level 1: Causes enemy heroes and creeps to ignore everything else and attack only you for a certain period of time. Enemy damage is raised but armor is reduced greatly.

Level 2: Causes enemy heroes and creeps to ignore everything else and attack only you for a certain period of time. Enemy damage is raised but armor is reduced greatly. They now cannot cast spells due to being in such an enraged state.
 

deleted

Member
Edit: I'll at least try. Similarities to existing mods and/or owners of GAF are not intended.



The Hivemind Lore (evil)
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Emperor of the mighty NetJeff, ruler of many. Some think he's overpowered, others that he is almighty. All agree that its better to be on his side than to stand against him.

Skills:

GAF Gold – the eternal Junior Member
Change the Member Status of a selected Hero.
Demod an enemy to junior status and lower their level
Buff an allied Hero to GAF Gold status and raise their level

Level 1 // Mana Cost 250 // Cooldown 90 // Casting Range 750 // Raises/Lowers 1 Level
Level 2 // Mana Cost 300 // Cooldown 100 // Casting Range 750 // Raises/Lowers 1 Level and buffs/cuts all attributes by 2

Post Thread
Force all enemies in sight to gather around a selected spot and keep their attention there:

Level 1 // Mana Cost 125 // Cooldown 15 // Casting Range 750 // Duration 3 (5*)
Level 2 // Mana Cost 175 // Cooldown 15 // Casting Range 750 // Duration 5 (7*)
Level 3 // Mana Cost 225 // Cooldown 15 // Casting Range 750 // Duration 7 (9*)

(Attention span can be improved by Staff of Caturday (* shows the improved values)

Thread-Backfire (passive)
Counter an enemy attack and reflect the incoming damage

Level 1 // Cooldown 30 // Area of Effect 1500 // reflect 1.0 of damage
Level 2 // Cooldown 25 // Area of Effect 1500 // reflect 1.5 of damage

Ban-Wave
Strikes all enemy heroes in sight with a Ban, forcing them to leave the game.

Level 1 // Mana Cost 500 // Cooldown 120 // global // disconnects enemy
If a target is invisible it will get revealed (both vision and true sight) but not banned.
 

Artanisix

Member
JOHN DUDEBRO
Protagonist of Dudebro II: My shit’s fucked up so I got to shoot/slice you -- It’s straight-up dawg time!

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STORY: In his quest to annihilate the evil private terrorist organization SkullPro, John Dudebro, the dude every bro wishes to be, was seduced by a siren and sent to an alternate dimension. Here he found the beautiful sisters Lina and Crystal Maiden, who discovered that not even their incredible magical powers could make them resist John's exaggerated muscles and pure badassery. With these new bros by his side, and the skills acquired from his multiple victories in World War II, John promises to bring true brodiocity to The Radiant and finish off this world's SkullPro -- The Dire -- before returning to his home. But will it be too late?

HERO INFORMATION: John Dudebro is straight up dawg time. His abilities to raise team morale are legendary, his focus on the battlefield unmatched. His shit is so fucked up that he has got to shoot AND slice you; using John Dudebro's ability to slice instead of shoot at the right moment can guarantee wins for our mighty hero. Brodiocity gives him his slice form and buffs him up for close combat where he's more vulnerable to attack. It also unlocks his slicing skills. Piston Sledge allows Dudebro to get up close and personal, or to slow an enemy and charge away to escape (but Dudebro never runs from a battle, so why even tell you that?). The Brocratic Method allows Dudebro to deal heavy burst to one unfortunate opponent. When things get rough, unleash This Shit is Fucked Up to become a living dude-God.

STATS:
STR: 25 + 2.4
AGI: 20 + 2.2
INT: 14 + 1.7

ROLE: Semi-Carry

AFFILIATION: The Radiant
STARTING DAMAGE: 51-60
BASE ARMOR: 3.0
MOVESPEED: 290
ATTACK RANGE: 400
ATTACK ANIMATION: 0.5/0.5
CASTING ANIMATION: 0.3/0.51
BASE ATTACK TIME: 1.7
MISSLE SPEED: Instant
SIGHT RANGE: 1800/800

SKILLS

Q: Brodiocity
Ability type: Passive Aura / Active Skill
Cooldown: 30 seconds
Mana cost: 0
Passive: John Dudebro is the only man with the skills -- and the gonads -- to stop the evil organization SkullPro. Oozing with the purest essence of brodiocity, John Dudebro's charm increases the attack damage of allied heroes by +15/22/29/36 and increases the health of allied heroes by +50/75/125/175 in a 1000-yard radius around John Dudebro.

Active: John Dudebro secretly wears space marine armor under his shirt, hidden below his muscles. Activating this skill unleashes his inner brodiocity for 6/8/10/12 seconds, giving John Dudebro +2/3/4/5 armor, turning him into a melee hero who can slice people with his knife, and reducing his base attack speed to 1.6/1.5/1.4/1.3. He does not lose his passive bonuses in this state. You may return to range form at any time by using the skill again.


W: Piston Sledge
Ability type: Active Skill
Mana cost: 50 / 50
Cooldown: 15 seconds / 15 seconds
Range form: Named after John Dudebro's famous World War II partner. John Dudebro fires a shotgun shell that spreads in a cone in front of himself, inflicting 50/100/150/200 magic damage and slowing for 40% for 2.75/3.25/3.75/4.25 seconds.

Melee form: John Dudebro charges at a designated point. If he comes in contact with an enemy hero, he slams them into the ground with his mighty biceps, inflicting 50/75/100/125 magic damage and rooting the enemy for 1.5/2/2.5/3 seconds. The enemy can still cast spells in this state but cannot attack for the duration. John Dudebro is magic immune during this charge.


E: The Brocratic Method
Ability type: Active Skill
Mana Cost: 50 / 50
Cooldown: 15 seconds / 20 seconds
Range form: Using his skills in Duderonomy, John Dudebro assesses an enemy target and finds them unsuitable for bro-hood. The enemy finds this demoralizing, reducing their armor by 2/3/4/5 and reducing their sight to 500/500 for 8 seconds.

Melee form: John Dudebro strikes at the enemy's critical weakness, inflicting 1.5x/2.0x/2.5x/3.0 x base damage critical strike in physical damage.


R: This Shit is Fucked Up
Ability Type: Active Skill
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 75
Many Gaffers believe that Dudebro II is never going to come out. This enrages John Dudebro greatly. Dudebro enters an enraged melee form for 9/13/17 seconds. Dudebro's muscles enlarge, increasing base damage by 100%/150%/250% but reducing attack speed by 100%/80%/60%. Piston Sledge melee form cooldown is reduced to 10/8/6 seconds in this form.


RIVALRY QUOTES
To Axe: "Axe, the way you wield your axe reminds me of General Limpwrist's limp wrists."
To Lich: "SkullPro's mascot? I'll use your head as a shower nozzle and your dress for my curtains."
To Slardar: "I have three of you hanging up in my house right now."
 

Leonsito

Member
Artanisix said:
JOHN DUDEBRO
Protagonist of Dudebro II: My shit’s fucked up so I got to shoot/slice you -- It’s straight-up dawg time!

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STORY: In his quest to annihilate the evil private terrorist organization SkullPro, John Dudebro, the dude every bro wishes to be, was seduced by a siren and sent to an alternate dimension. Here he found the beautiful sisters Lina and Crystal Maiden, who discovered that not even their incredible magical powers could make them resist John's exaggerated muscles and pure badassery. With these new bros by his side, and the skills acquired from his multiple victories in World War II, John promises to bring true brodiocity to The Radiant and finish off this world's SkullPro -- The Dire -- before returning to his home. But will it be too late?

HERO INFORMATION: John Dudebro is straight up dawg time. His abilities to raise team morale are legendary, his focus on the battlefield unmatched. His shit is so fucked up that he has got to shoot AND slice you; using John Dudebro's ability to slice instead of shoot at the right moment can guarantee wins for our mighty hero. Brodiocity gives him his slice form and buffs him up for close combat where he's more vulnerable to attack. It also unlocks his slicing skills. Piston Sledge allows Dudebro to get up close and personal, or to slow an enemy and charge away to escape (but Dudebro never runs from a battle, so why even tell you that?). The Brocratic Method allows Dudebro to deal heavy burst to one unfortunate opponent. When things get rough, unleash This Shit is Fucked Up to become a living dude-God.

STATS:
STR: 25 + 2.4
AGI: 20 + 2.2
INT: 14 + 1.7

ROLE: Semi-Carry

AFFILIATION: The Radiant
STARTING DAMAGE: 51-60
BASE ARMOR: 3.0
MOVESPEED: 290
ATTACK RANGE: 400
ATTACK ANIMATION: 0.5/0.5
CASTING ANIMATION: 0.3/0.51
BASE ATTACK TIME: 1.7
MISSLE SPEED: Instant
SIGHT RANGE: 1800/800

SKILLS

Q: Brodiocity
Ability type: Passive Aura / Active Skill
Cooldown: 30 seconds
Mana cost: 0
Passive: John Dudebro is the only man with the skills -- and the gonads -- to stop the evil organization SkullPro. Oozing with the purest essence of brodiocity, John Dudebro's charm increases the attack damage of allied heroes by +15/22/29/36 and increases the health of allied heroes by +50/75/125/175 in a 1000-yard radius around John Dudebro.

Active: John Dudebro secretly wears space marine armor under his shirt, hidden below his muscles. Activating this skill unleashes his inner brodiocity for 6/8/10/12 seconds, giving John Dudebro +2/3/4/5 armor, turning him into a melee hero who can slice people with his knife, and reducing his base attack speed to 1.6/1.5/1.4/1.3. He does not lose his passive bonuses in this state. You may return to range form at any time by using the skill again.


W: Piston Sledge
Ability type: Active Skill
Mana cost: 50 / 50
Cooldown: 15 seconds / 15 seconds
Range form: Named after John Dudebro's famous World War II partner. John Dudebro fires a shotgun shell that spreads in a cone in front of himself, inflicting 50/100/150/200 magic damage and slowing for 40% for 2.75/3.25/3.75/4.25 seconds.

Melee form: John Dudebro charges at a designated point. If he comes in contact with an enemy hero, he slams them into the ground with his mighty biceps, inflicting 50/75/100/125 magic damage and rooting the enemy for 1.5/2/2.5/3 seconds. The enemy can still cast spells in this state but cannot attack for the duration. John Dudebro is magic immune during this charge.


E: The Brocratic Method
Ability type: Active Skill
Mana Cost: 50 / 50
Cooldown: 15 seconds / 20 seconds
Range form: Using his skills in Duderonomy, John Dudebro assesses an enemy target and finds them unsuitable for bro-hood. The enemy finds this demoralizing, reducing their armor by 2/3/4/5 and reducing their sight to 500/500 for 8 seconds.

Melee form: John Dudebro strikes at the enemy's critical weakness, inflicting 1.5x/2.0x/2.5x/3.0 x base damage critical strike in physical damage.


R: This Shit is Fucked Up
Ability Type: Active Skill
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 75
Many Gaffers believe that Dudebro II is never going to come out. This enrages John Dudebro greatly. Dudebro enters an enraged melee form for 9/13/17 seconds. Dudebro's muscles enlarge, increasing base damage by 100%/150%/250% but reducing attack speed by 100%/80%/60%. Piston Sledge melee form cooldown is reduced to 10/8/6 seconds in this form.


RIVALRY QUOTES
To Axe: "Axe, the way you wield your axe reminds me of General Limpwrist's limp wrists."
To Lich: "SkullPro's mascot? I'll use your head as a shower nozzle and your dress for my curtains."
To Slardar: "I have three of you hanging up in my house right now."

Vote!
 

Sn4ke_911

If I ever post something in Japanese which I don't understand, please BAN me.
PNstyle said:
GAFFER
(German word for gaper, gawper http://dict.leo.org/ende?lp=ende&la...=relaxed&sectHdr=on&spellToler=&search=gaffer)
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Dota 2 Lore:
GAFFER is a creepy guy in his 40s with a very bizarre hobby. He gapes/gawps people to molests them and make them feel unsure.

Stats:
Strength - He has enough strength to hold his binoculars
Agility - 30
Int - minus 5

Attack Range: 900
Damage: Depends on the psychological state of his enemy. Usually 60
Armor: A trench coate does not protect you at all...

Ranged Supporter very OP

Basic attack - GAFFER gazes at his enemie to give him psychological damage.

Skills:
Q - Concentrated Gaze
GAFFER gazes at his enemy through his binoculars from 600 range to give him psychological damage plus additional stats reduction (70%) for 5 seconds.

W - Molest
GAFFER molests his enemy from a 550 range by looking through his binoculars. This causes the enemy to feel unsure whether he likes it or not and he back off to the nearest tower and stays there for a 3 seconds, not being able to do something.

E - Trench Coat
GAFFER (who is naked under his trench coat btw..) opens his trench which causes every enemy in 450 range to gaze at him and be confused for 3 seconds.

R - Ultimate Gaze
GAFFER puts down his binoculars to look into his enemies eyes from a 1500 range to stun them for 6 seconds and make them cry like a baby.

Recommended Items:
Swarovski's Swarovision (the best binoculars in the world?)
Black Leather Trenchcoat by Dolce & Gabbana

GAFFER Skill Build:
Q
W
W
Q
E
E
R
W
Q
E
Q
W
E
R
Q
W
W



sorry for bad english.

Vote

He gave me a BF3 beta key, i had to do this :p
 

Jocchan

Ὁ μεμβερος -ου
Artanisix said:
JOHN DUDEBRO
Protagonist of Dudebro II: My shit’s fucked up so I got to shoot/slice you -- It’s straight-up dawg time!

FHOip.jpg


STORY: In his quest to annihilate the evil private terrorist organization SkullPro, John Dudebro, the dude every bro wishes to be, was seduced by a siren and sent to an alternate dimension. Here he found the beautiful sisters Lina and Crystal Maiden, who discovered that not even their incredible magical powers could make them resist John's exaggerated muscles and pure badassery. With these new bros by his side, and the skills acquired from his multiple victories in World War II, John promises to bring true brodiocity to The Radiant and finish off this world's SkullPro -- The Dire -- before returning to his home. But will it be too late?

HERO INFORMATION: John Dudebro is straight up dawg time. His abilities to raise team morale are legendary, his focus on the battlefield unmatched. His shit is so fucked up that he has got to shoot AND slice you; using John Dudebro's ability to slice instead of shoot at the right moment can guarantee wins for our mighty hero. Brodiocity gives him his slice form and buffs him up for close combat where he's more vulnerable to attack. It also unlocks his slicing skills. Piston Sledge allows Dudebro to get up close and personal, or to slow an enemy and charge away to escape (but Dudebro never runs from a battle, so why even tell you that?). The Brocratic Method allows Dudebro to deal heavy burst to one unfortunate opponent. When things get rough, unleash This Shit is Fucked Up to become a living dude-God.

STATS:
STR: 25 + 2.4
AGI: 20 + 2.2
INT: 14 + 1.7

ROLE: Semi-Carry

AFFILIATION: The Radiant
STARTING DAMAGE: 51-60
BASE ARMOR: 3.0
MOVESPEED: 290
ATTACK RANGE: 400
ATTACK ANIMATION: 0.5/0.5
CASTING ANIMATION: 0.3/0.51
BASE ATTACK TIME: 1.7
MISSLE SPEED: Instant
SIGHT RANGE: 1800/800

SKILLS

Q: Brodiocity
Ability type: Passive Aura / Active Skill
Cooldown: 30 seconds
Mana cost: 0
Passive: John Dudebro is the only man with the skills -- and the gonads -- to stop the evil organization SkullPro. Oozing with the purest essence of brodiocity, John Dudebro's charm increases the attack damage of allied heroes by +15/22/29/36 and increases the health of allied heroes by +50/75/125/175 in a 1000-yard radius around John Dudebro.

Active: John Dudebro secretly wears space marine armor under his shirt, hidden below his muscles. Activating this skill unleashes his inner brodiocity for 6/8/10/12 seconds, giving John Dudebro +2/3/4/5 armor, turning him into a melee hero who can slice people with his knife, and reducing his base attack speed to 1.6/1.5/1.4/1.3. He does not lose his passive bonuses in this state. You may return to range form at any time by using the skill again.


W: Piston Sledge
Ability type: Active Skill
Mana cost: 50 / 50
Cooldown: 15 seconds / 15 seconds
Range form: Named after John Dudebro's famous World War II partner. John Dudebro fires a shotgun shell that spreads in a cone in front of himself, inflicting 50/100/150/200 magic damage and slowing for 40% for 2.75/3.25/3.75/4.25 seconds.

Melee form: John Dudebro charges at a designated point. If he comes in contact with an enemy hero, he slams them into the ground with his mighty biceps, inflicting 50/75/100/125 magic damage and rooting the enemy for 1.5/2/2.5/3 seconds. The enemy can still cast spells in this state but cannot attack for the duration. John Dudebro is magic immune during this charge.


E: The Brocratic Method
Ability type: Active Skill
Mana Cost: 50 / 50
Cooldown: 15 seconds / 20 seconds
Range form: Using his skills in Duderonomy, John Dudebro assesses an enemy target and finds them unsuitable for bro-hood. The enemy finds this demoralizing, reducing their armor by 2/3/4/5 and reducing their sight to 500/500 for 8 seconds.

Melee form: John Dudebro strikes at the enemy's critical weakness, inflicting 1.5x/2.0x/2.5x/3.0 x base damage critical strike in physical damage.


R: This Shit is Fucked Up
Ability Type: Active Skill
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 75
Many Gaffers believe that Dudebro II is never going to come out. This enrages John Dudebro greatly. Dudebro enters an enraged melee form for 9/13/17 seconds. Dudebro's muscles enlarge, increasing base damage by 100%/150%/250% but reducing attack speed by 100%/80%/60%. Piston Sledge melee form cooldown is reduced to 10/8/6 seconds in this form.


RIVALRY QUOTES
To Axe: "Axe, the way you wield your axe reminds me of General Limpwrist's limp wrists."
To Lich: "SkullPro's mascot? I'll use your head as a shower nozzle and your dress for my curtains."
To Slardar: "I have three of you hanging up in my house right now."
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Vote, of course.
 

deleted

Member
Artanisix said:
JOHN DUDEBRO
Protagonist of Dudebro II: My shit’s fucked up so I got to shoot/slice you -- It’s straight-up dawg time!

You have my vote.

BTW: Isn't the vote system a bit flawed? We don't know which entrys will still follow and with only one vote per user all will vote for Dudebro and the second key will get to anybody who got votes before this entry.
 

n0b

Member
xyla said:
BTW: Isn't the vote system a bit flawed? We don't know which entrys will still follow and with only one vote per user all will vote for Dudebro and the second key will get to anybody who got votes before this entry.
Yeah the vote system is flawed. You can't have a fair vote unless all entries are visible before you vote.
 

jackdoe

Member
n0b said:
Yeah the vote system is flawed. You can't have a fair vote unless all entries are visible before you vote.
There should be an entry period and a voting period to make it fair.
 
I admit the voting system is flawed, I will change it to this

Entrys until 5pm est Saturday, voting will commence in new thread, and will end Sunday afternoon 1pm est

Sound good?
 

Goon Boon

Banned
I vote nay, because rather than rushing to get votes, some guy is going to wait until the deadline to submit and their entry will be amazing and make guys with mspaint/rudimentary photoshop ability have no chance.

Of course I may be saying that because right now im in 2nd place :(
 
Well that happens in most art contests

I will be throwing the last key I have in the contest, because all the other contests I can think of are not fair for one person to win unless I do another random key, this way we can get more awesome hero submissions.

so 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place will get keys.
 
GhostRidah said:
Well that happens in most art contests

I will be throwing the last key I have in the contest, because all the other contests I can think of are not fair for one person to win unless I do another random key, this way we can get more awesome hero submissions.

so 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place will get keys.
Thanks.
 
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