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NeoGAF Creative Writing Challenge #102 - "Conflict"

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Ashes

Banned
Theme - "Conflict"

Word Limit: ~2000
Dance with death at ~2500 = don't say I didn't warn you!

Submission Deadline: Friday, 27 July, 2012 by 11:59 PM Pacific.

Voting begins Saturday, 28 July 2012, and goes until Monday, 30 July 2012 at 11:59 PM Pacific.

Optional Secondary Objective: Avoid common faults in short stories

I was going to copy paste stuff, but most of you are experienced writers, and should already have the said stuff bookmarked. For the rest of us, there is google!

Submission Guidelines:

- One entry per poster.
- All submissions must be written during the time of the challenge.
- Using the topic as the title of your piece is discouraged.
- Keep to the word count!

Voting Guidelines:

- Three votes per voter. Please denote in your voting your 1st (3 pts), 2nd (2 pts), and 3rd (1 pt) place votes.
- Please read all submissions before voting.
- You must vote in order to be eligible to win the challenge.
- When voting ends, the winner gets a collective pat on the back, and starts the new challenge.

NeoGAF Creative Writing Challenge FAQ
Previous Challenge Threads and Themes


 

Esiquio

Member
I'll be done moving next week, so maybe I can finally get a whole story written on time! Didn't read any entries from the one you just won (yet, I WILL), but congrats anyways, Ashes :)
 

Cyan

Banned
Love the theme!

But what's this about leaving the secondary so vague? I like it, but tell us what specifically you mean!
 

Jables

Member
Congrats on your recent victory Ashes. I'm thinking (and hoping) that this theme will be a little easier for me to deal with. I still have family in town until Saturday but I hope to get something together for the deadline.

Now to google these common faults in short stories of which you speak...
 

Aaron

Member
I'm determined to compete in all even numbered challenges. Still hammering away at a novel and switching jobs in this sweltering heat so free time is a little scarce.
 

Tangent

Member
Congrats, Ashes!

I'm determined to compete in all even numbered challenges. Still hammering away at a novel and switching jobs in this sweltering heat so free time is a little scarce.

Dude, that is so awesome that you do all even numbered challenges. I like random self-imposed rules like that. Also, congrats on the novel! That's what I hope to do but still don't feel like I have a fleshed out story.
 

FairyD

Member
Alright, I'm in on this one. I already wrote a rough draft. I just have to trim it down to the 2k word length and do some editing. I have a week to do that before the deadline, good thing I started early this time.
 

Kevtones

Member
Yesterday, I only had three conflicts, all of which were self-imposed. Today, I had eight, all were self-imposed except for the fight I got into. Me and this dude punched into the other's punch and looked at each other as if we were suddenly more alive - as if the halted conflict/fistfuck became the real conflict.

Guy was a douche though. He punched me in the kidney stone and it passed in my first conflict today. There's no other conflicts down there except for the other k-stone business of which I hope is in its first trimester.

Would like at least 2X the sum of the previous days conflicts though... Today, I'm at 3:

1 kidney stone
1 yell at girlfriend for trying to help
1 troll on neogaf

Luckily, analyzing my conflicts equates to a conflict because it means I'm upping my conflict goal out of inadequacy. It's a little cheap but if you think about, I can think about upping my goal every day as a means of conflict +1 and then NOT do it to both be lazy as well as up my conflict stat further. Let's shoot for 3X and then think about maybe thinking about the repercussions, maybe.
 

Puddles

Banned
Side note: if people would prefer I don't plug my blog in these threads, please do say the word. I feel like it's relevant, but I'm leery of getting spammy.

I've never had a problem with people plugging their blogs or sites as long as they don't act self-important about it.
 
Okay, I know I said I'd try to join in last time, but stuff came in the way.
This time I'll totally do it though, so I'll start writing 300 words a day and do one big edit :p

Woo, 340 words written!
 

ZeroRay

Member
Gonna get in on this!

Exams are gonna make it a bit tight though.

Oh and damn, @ Cyan.

Trying to bring me down, bro? :p
 

Aaron

Member
There's no way my story is going to fit the word limit. It's already past 2k, and probably end up close to 3k. I'll submit it anyway, and people can just stop reading before the actual conflict happens.
 

Ashes

Banned
I think the word count just jumped to 2500 now. 3k is too long a read if we have to read 10 stories. Try your best to get it around 2500 for the thread, then change up for later maybe?

Edit: note, this is hopefully the exception to the rule, for the rest of us. :p
Think of it as a previous winners perk or something, I don't know. Make something up.
 
Up to a thousand words now.
I'm kinda liking this story and debating whether or not I should incorporate a particular "twist" I had in mind before I started or just do without it.
 

Aaron

Member
I think the word count just jumped to 2500 now. 3k is too long a read if we have to read 10 stories. Try your best to get it around 2500 for the thread, then change up for later maybe?

Edit: note, this is hopefully the exception to the rule, for the rest of us. :p
Think of it as a previous winners perk or something, I don't know. Make something up.
Wow, thanks. I'll do my damndest to keep it under 2.5.
 

Puddles

Banned
I think the word count just jumped to 2500 now. 3k is too long a read if we have to read 10 stories. Try your best to get it around 2500 for the thread, then change up for later maybe?

Edit: note, this is hopefully the exception to the rule, for the rest of us. :p
Think of it as a previous winners perk or something, I don't know. Make something up.

I don't like the idea of giving anyone a singular competitive advantage.

I will write 2,499 words for this challenge.
 

Ashes

Banned
I don't like the idea of giving anyone a singular competitive advantage.

I will write 2,499 words for this challenge.

Looks like we got our selves a good old fashioned mutiny on our hands. ;)

But will we allow it? Only time will tell. Whether the op should be overuled is the bigger question here. ;)

Ashes, you are a terrible dictator!

I leave the dictating to the seasoned pros. Ma mamma always said there'd be days like these. Though in defence of the inherent philosophy of the short story, the primary concern of the medium ought to be that it is what you do with the fewer words, not more; with the emphasis on a lower word count, no?
 

Ashes

Banned
hmm. Neogaf will only have the link, not what is at the end of the link. Otherwise google would own the internet. So you won't lose any rights there. or give neogaf any right to your work.

Or do you mean whether dropbox has copyright to your works? I think to a certain extent just by sharing the link, means you allow them to copy from your host computer to their host server so as to allow whoever want to download a copy to their device to read to do so. That exchange, I mean that service, by its very nature, means that you have to grant them the ability/right to copy, no? But I don't think it is all that scary, like say with facebook or something.

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Puddles

Banned
I'm actually headed for Phnom Penh on Friday, so I'll need to finish my story tomorrow if I'm going to get it up. I've got a good start, so that shouldn't be a problem.
 
I'm going to aim for 2500 words, but 500 of them will be negative words.

2 days? No ideas whatsoever? Just the sort of impossible odds I like!
 
I'm going to aim for 2500 words, but 500 of them will be negative words.

2 days? No ideas whatsoever? Just the sort of impossible odds I like!

I'm at 1300 and am planning on just forcing down 500 more words and see if I can edit the whole mess.
I just want to finish this little piece regardless of what I think of it, just to set a precedent of not quitting :p
 
I somehow managed to write 700 words and got 2000 words to work with.
I definitely see the appeal of writing now, feels pretty good when you get into a good rhythm and just keep on writing.
 
He lurched out of bed at the incessant sound of his phone beeping, stumbling across the room to rip the offending device from its charging cradle and shut it off without ever glancing at who had dared to bother him at this hour. Through the open window he could hear the dry susurrus of the chill night air toying with late summer leaves, starting to yellow upon the branch, and the gentle bubbling of his rock-pool fountain in the garden below. And then, as he let the sounds of the night wash over him, he heard a faint rustling. The sound of some one, or some thing, clawing, scraping through the rubbish sacks. Again.

Slamming open the window, he poked his head out to, hopefully, see a glimpse of the creature that had plagued him and his rubbish sacks for the past few weeks, but as he craned his neck to peer into the alleyway that detached his two bedroom semi-detached from its neighbour, he saw nothing but darkness. He stomped downstairs and headed for the kitchen, the house illuminating room by room as he flicked lights on as he passed. Peering through the glassy gloom of the kitchen door, he was sure he could see dark, inky shapes moving about amid the blackness. With a turn of the key in the lock, he opened the back door and stepped out in to the cool night air.

With cautious paces he softly rounded upon the alley, ready to boldly assail whatever intruder lurked within, but found only the tattered and distended remains of his rubbish sacks. With a silent curse spat through gritted teeth, he stormed back to his house, leaving the mess for the morning. As he went to close the door behind him, he noticed two gleaming points piercing the gloom, two amber ovals reflecting the light back at him, advancing slowly toward him through the darkness. He felt an involuntary start of fear, while the ovals pulled up a few paces short of his door, eyes framed now by a distinctly feline face.

He thoughts then sped unbidden back to his youth, and time spent with his Grandma in her little house by the seaside, listening to her talk about the land and the folk that dwelt there. He had inherited his hatred of cats from her. She detested them leaving their muck in the flower beds, and yowling and swearing at all hours of the night. If she caught sight of one in her garden, she'd set the hose on it quick, sending it scrambling for cover. But there was this one cat, a big, fat black and white tom, that would boldly walk around as if it owned the place. He never once saw his Grandma turn the hose on that cat. “Never cross a black cat” was her explanation, even though the cat was only mostly black.

The cat staring at him now was all black, and looking into its dark, amber eyes, he had the sudden sensation that much time had passed since their eyes first met. Shaking his gaze away from those eyes, uncaring and cold, he turned to the sink, pouring out a glass of water that, he hoped, would deter the cat from returning again to savage his rubbish sacks, but upon turning his gaze back outside he found that the feline intruder was nowhere to be seen. With a shrug, he threw the water onto the paving stones, as if to emphasise what would have happened, had the cat deigned to stick around long enough. Glancing at the clock, he again cursed as he noticed the time. Half way to morning already, he thought with a yawn as he trudged back up to bed.

His dreams were fraught with half-seen visions of dark and grim creatures that lurked in the shadows of memory, of the tales his Grandma would tell, about Woden and the Great Hunt, about the first kings of the lands, about the mischievous Billy Blind, or the dream-assailing Mare that caused havoc to sleeping minds. These stories,which had so enthralled him as a child, so sparked his imagination, now sent it into a terror, causing him to toss and turn in his slumber. But it was not long before dawn rose to claim him, sliding its tendrils beneath the curtain to dazzle his bleary awakening eyes.

The day that greeted him was not a kind one. Grey, listless skies bristling, even at this early hour, with the sort of insistent, humid heat that could send a man stark raving mad, given enough time. He made himself a hasty breakfast and took a brisk shower, only to be horrified to find that he had somehow wasted an hour and would be late for work if he didn't get a move on. Predictably, the car didn't start. Nor would it, even after much cajoling, tinkering, pleading and cursing. Finally, he called a cab, which was late and reeked of cigarette smoke, depositing him outside of his offices nearly a full half hour late.

After the savage remonstration he received from his boss, his ear drums were left ringing. He'd practically had to get on his knees and grovel just to keep his job. He booted up his computer only to be greeted by a litany of driver errors. He sighed and wearily dialled the number for technical support. The line was engaged, and continued to be engaged most of the day, while his luck only continued to get worse. He returned home, many hours later, soaked to the bone and now lacking for gainful employment, his boss having fired him upon the discovery of a number of particularly malicious porn-site viruses littering his hard drive, that he had sworn blind weren't his doing.

Five years in that place, gone. All for nothing. His feet hurt, squelching with every step, and he cursed the dozens of empty taxis that had sped by as if he were invisible. Finally, blissfully, he saw his house rise in the distance through a haze of smog and rain. His house, lacking a car parked out front, and with the door yawning open lazily on its hinges. He ran inside, a panic rising that only grew as he checked through the rooms. Everything of worth was gone. Raising a hand to his giddy head, he felt a sob of helplessness well up in his chest, but choked it down as his thoughts returned once again to his Grandma's words.

“Never cross a black cat” she would say between puffs of pipe smoke, “And I don't mean, 'don't cross their path' as people prattle whenever they see one nowadays, no. Cats aren't no malevolent demon to be run away from. They're just creatures, and small ones at that. Nothing a cat could do that a short, sharp kick up the backside wouldn't soon dissuade. But they see better than us, and hear better too. The ancient Egyptians believed that cats eyes caught the light of the setting sun, and by keeping the cats content and healthy they would ensure the sun's rise the next day. They also believed cats could see beyond where mortal eyes can peer, beneath the veil of time and death. So think about that next time a cat stares at you, especially a black one. They have something of the sphinx about them still, even after thousands of years.”

Her words resonating in his mind, he strode with trepidation towards the kitchen and up to the back door, peering fearfully into the gloom so that he could confirm what would be there; nothing. He let out a wordless cry, sprawling upon the counter top and beating his fists bloody against the cupboards. He returned to his living room, now bare of the gadgets that marked twenty-first century life. For all humanities advancement, for all the wealth of information and entertainment available at their fingertips, why are we so hasty to dismiss the unknown, to say that it's 'childish' or 'idiotic' to hold true to superstition and belief, he wondered. He had believed once, and a part of him continued to do so, even after society told him to grow up and stop being foolish. But, evidently he hadn't believed enough to never forget that you shouldn't ever cross a black cat.

Later, much calmer and with saucer in hand, he stepped out in to the cool night air. He placed the saucer down on the grass, careful not to spill any of the ice cold milk that lapped about the saucers edge, and waited.

“Here, kitty, kitty...”
 
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