Aaron - Sumo boxing isn't actually a thing yet? Nifty concept, really liked the ending too.
En-ou - I feel like that long paragraph flashback could've been split into two. Felt a bit unwieldy and it doesn't seem like it would ruin the pacing if it were. Other than that, it was a nice story but the ending feels awkward to me, maybe because the story up until the end doesn't really imply any finality between the main character and Ameillya.
Bombadil - Man that rape scene was a little uncomfortable to read. The final scene was a little odd but I guess the final line said it all.
FairyD - Damn, that was depressing and hits really close to home
But I enjoyed it. Ever had plans to write the other point of view, Calsi's I mean?
Bootaaay - Always love your style, definitely enjoyed how superstition becomes real all of a sudden.
Elfforkusu - I thought it was well-written. It wasn't really the sci-fi setting that put me off but the only character seemed a bit faceless even when comparing/contrasting it to a computer, which is what I can only guess was what you were going for.
SquiddyBiscuit - Fantastic ending, that final line is perfect.
Tangent - Felt it could've maybe used something more out of his reminiscing, like trying to pass on his creativity to his children.
ZeroRay - That was an interesting fight scene but I kinda wish I knew exactly why it came down to a fight. Their spat was a bit vague so I don't really understand how an impromptu girl's fight club would've fixed anything but their frustrations.
Ashes - Liked the chatter between the guys, I was kind of going for that with my story too but mine came out half-baked. Then it got more serious but that was good too.
Cyan - Odd premise to have someone saying he didn't do anything illegal but has to in order to avoid the police.
Mike Works - Don't know what to feel about the ending, it just kinda ended abruptly and I guess was purposely vague about what happened with his sister in that case? Did she turn, I'm guessing? The 'ohshit' factor worked out okay though.
Votes:
1. FairyD
2. Bootaaay
3. SquiddyBiscuit
HMs: Aaron, Bombadil, Tangent, Ashes