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[dragonzdogma]

Can you come up with an interesting (funny,scary,mysterious,ect) story using these 2 comic book pages?

Note:These comic pages come from a (non commercial ) comic book I was working on, but never had the motivation to start writing the story LOL.

 

[xxracerxx]

Wait, you drew that art before developing the story? That seems backwards.

 

[gugi40]

Wait, you drew that art before developing the story? That seems backwards.

Not true, I started my comic from one sketch it developed into a huge ass story with so many characters.

I know character sketches are a common thing, but to draw out 5 panels with text bubbles seems weird to me.

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OP I don't understand what is going on from these images? It seems like there was almost a story happening but then it cut to other things, is he fighting a monster? Is the ladies legs weaponry? Is that a ninja on the bottom?

 

[Alienous]

That woman's legs are an axe, sword, and spiked ball and chain.

The story writes itself.

 

[ebullientprism]

I cant even tell WTF is going on on the top half of both pages.

 

[xxracerxx]

Not true, I started my comic from one sketch it developed into a huge ass story with so many characters.

I know character sketches are a common thing, but to draw out 5 panels with text bubbles seems weird to me.

 

[frontovik]

Can you come up with an interesting (funny,scary,mysterious,ect) story using these 2 comic book pages?

Guy doesn't want to be anime. Lady says you are anime. The end.

 

[Stallion Dan]

That woman's legs are an axe, sword, and spiked ball and chain.

The story writes itself.

The twist is one of them isn't a leg.

 

[dragonzdogma]

Wait, you drew that art before developing the story? That seems backwards.

I had a general idea for each scene,which I never wrote down

Not true, I started my comic from one sketch it developed into a huge ass story with so many characters.

Yup, I do this a lot, sometimes concept art starts turning into the story and so on.

OP I don't understand what is going on from these images? It seems like there was almost a story happening but then it cut to other things, is he fighting a monster? Is the ladies legs weaponry? Is that a ninja on the bottom?

I never wrote down anything and lost some of the earlier pages, it is whatever you want it to be at this point.

 

[Breads]

I know character sketches are a common thing, but to draw out 5 panels with text bubbles seems weird to me.

Last comic I worked on I only had a spit draft so the first 10 or so pages were completely wordless until the story was finalized.

 

[Alienous]

Ok, the dude wears two watches, because one works and the other one looks cool. He lost his tie because a demonic cloud ate it, which causes him to go postal. At the same time he meets a lady with sword, axe, ball and chain legs (as Stallion Dan implied there's a reveal later in the story that one of them is a penis), and his anger at losing his tie has him decide to steal people's Amazon packages by stuffing them into his oversized pocket, while the lady helps him with the agreement that she gets any and all finger jewellery they steal. But one day they mess with the wrong ninja's Amazon package.

 

[HStallion]

It was all the dream of a ninja, the end.

 

[John Kowalski]

Think about it.

 

[gugi40]

I had a general idea for each scene,which I never wrote down
Yup, I do this a lot, sometimes concept art starts turning into the story and so on.
I never wrote down anything and lost some of the earlier pages, it is whatever you want it to be at this point.

That is way too much freedom for me.

 

[dragonzdogma]

Think about it.

That made my day!