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Metal Gear Solid: The Novel

Frog

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The official novelization of Metal Gear Solid (the 1998 PSX game), written by Raymond Benson, came out a few days ago.

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The cover features the original MGS1 title screen illustration by Yoji Shinkawa. This first edition is a trade paperback from Del Ray.

For anyone planning to read the book, I've spoiler tagged any events or new information that appears only in the book. However, anything that happened in the game has not been tagged in this post.

Overall I thought the book was pretty poorly written. The new dialog the author added for Snake, as well as his internal monologue, don't work very well in my opinion. His shallow thoughts don't seem to match his occasional philosophical soliloquies, and his campy action-hero one-liners don't live up to his badass persona. Okay, so some of his original lines were pretty campy, but it's pushed even farther here. There's a lot of questionable phrasing in the book as well. It feels pretty rushed. They were probably tight on time to get it out before MGS4.

For the most part, the book closely follows the events of MGS1. It mainly follows the original rather than TTS; Snake doesn't do any acrobatics beyond a few tumbles and cartwheels. However, some of the translation corrections from TTS are included. For instance, Zanzibar is now Zanzibarland. There are a few additions to the plot, and since Payton and Kojima presumably had some input on the novel (going by the Acknowledgments), it's possible that these additions will be in keeping with any retconning done in MGS4. Ryan also hinted in the latest edition of the Kojima Productions REPORT that his input on the book was mostly to make it match continuity with MGS4. Therefore, any major retcons or additions that the book added may be important when it comes to MGS4.

Here's some of the interesting changes/additions the book made to the plot of MGS1


The Les Enfants Terribles Project
was carried out in an underground cave in New Mexico by Dr. Clark, who is now a woman. (Clark was referred to as "he" in the English version of MGS, although I don't know if a gender was specified in Japanese) General Jim Houseman (who later becomes the evil Secretary of Defense in MGS) and the POTUS were present for the birth. The surrogate mother only gives birth to twins, not triplets, so Solidus was created later. This is actually their ninth attempt to clone Big Boss. The Pentagon is trying to keep the project a secret from Big Boss, but Clark suspects that Big Boss already knows.

Johnny is described
as a rookie soldier and the head computer technician at Shadow Moses, which ties in with his MGS4 role.

Otacon makes mention of
his estranged sister, E.E.

After the escape sequence with Snake and Meryl in the jeep,
Otacon meets up with them outside, and they work together to rescue some civilian hostages from an underground bunker. Campbell sends a transport to pick up Otacon and the other hostages, while Snake and Meryl leave on the snowmobile. They can't return on the transport with Otacon, since they're "officially" dead.

Even though the book follows the ending in which
Meryl lives, Campbell tells Snake that Meryl is his daughter, something that is only revealed in the game if Meryl dies. Campbell also says he was planning to tell Meryl the truth after this operation was over.

In the epilogue conversation with Mr. President, Ocelot specifies that
FoxDie didn't kill him because he had taken the vaccine. This was never mentioned in the games, and I had always assumed he was never a target in the first place.

I like the way they poked a bit of fun at the dominant/recessive controversy. For those who don't know about the argument, I'll explain. In the game, when Liquid first tells Snake that they are clones, he says that he (Liquid) got all the "flawed, recessive genes" as part of the experiment in order to create a superior clone, Solid Snake, who had all the superior dominant genes. In a last minute twist at the end of the game, Ocelot reports to Solidus that "the inferior one was the winner after all." In other words, Liquid was incorrect; Solid Snake was in fact the inferior twin. Some MGS fans argue that this means Solid Snake had the recessive genes and Liquid had the dominant genes, since Liquid said the dominant genes were better. Others argue that Snake still had the dominant genes, it's just that Liquid's recessive genes were superior. Still others say it's pretty damned stupid that all the dominant traits could be superior to all the recessive traits, or vice versa. In the book,
when the twins are first born, Dr. Clark is explaining to the United States President (Nixon?) how one clone will have the dominant traits, and the other clone will have the recessive traits. Since one will be sent to Britain, and the other will work for America, the President says something like "Ooh, make sure we get the one with the dominant genes! I want us to have the advantage." And Clark thinks to herself (paraphrasing): "Is he a fucking idiot?" Anyways, it seems that the ultimate answer is that Snake had the dominant genes, and was determined to be inferior, and Liquid had the recessive genes, and was determined to be superior.

Then there's the controversy over whether Snake's hair is naturally blonde or brown/black. Some fans say he is blonde like Liquid, and he dyes his hair. This is based on what looks like blonde hair in the MGS briefing, and the original design of Pliskin in MGS2. In the book,
Snake's hair is naturally brown.

Some rather insignificant but odd changes

Snake no longer smuggled in his cigarettes in his stomach. He has to steal some from a guard.

The damage done to the communication towers by the Hind makes Snake recall 9/11/01. Officially released timelines already confirmed that the WTC attacks happened in the MGS universe, and it's reconfirmed here.

Some rather lame MGS4 "foreshadowing"


When Snake tries to blend into the shadows, he wishes he had a suit that "really could blend in with his surroundings."

Before he dies, Psycho Mantis has a vision of Snake's future, where he's an old man with a gun in his mouth.
 
I'm sorry but no matter how cheesy people think this book is, the spoilers put a smile to my face. Thanks for the quick summary.

According to Ryan, Raymond Benson consulted with him and Hideo Kojima and made sure that stuff that wasn't revealed in MGS1 to be answered in the book.

With that, spoilers might be canon cause we don't know what Kojima reveals in MGS4.
 
I really enjoy novelized versions of movies. Considering I am a bit fuzzy about MGS1s story, I will take advantage of my Barnes and Noble membership and buy this bad boy. Thanks!
 
I read some of it at BN. The quality of the writing is horrible, as expected. But that's normal for game adaptations. It's not like they were gonna get cormac mcarthy to write it. As an MGS superfan, I'll just pretend it doesn't exist. Like I did with TTS.
 
No mention of the Merry Christmas line? :lol

PS. Why was it farmed out to Del Ray books? Shitty publisher with even shittier authors.
 
akachan ningen said:
I read some of it at BN. The quality of the writing is horrible, as expected. But that's normal for game adaptations. It's not like they were gonna get cormac mcarthy to write it. As an MGS superfan, I'll just pretend it doesn't exist. Like I did with TTS.

Aw come on now, I know the writing isn't as sophisticated as something you'd read at the college level, but it's a damn novelization of game. What more did you expect? Benson is a pretty good writer. No need to throw him together with Stephen King. :P
 
SamuraiX- said:
Aw come on now, I know the writing isn't as sophisticated as something you'd read at the college level, but it's a damn novelization of game. What more did you expect? Benson is a pretty good writer. No need to throw him together with Stephen King. :P

Hey, Stephen King is like Shakespeare compared to this guy. :p
 
SRG01 said:
No mention of the Merry Christmas line? :lol

Yep, that was a good example of bad writing:

Snake could hear them muttering something about a storm. He surprised them by stepping out from behind the crate and standing directly in front of them. "Merry Christmas," Snake said as he delivered two powerhouse punches, left and then right, into the guards' faces. The soldiers plopped to the floor. "I forgot to tell you - Christmas is early this year."

Some more gems:

"Snake thought Mei Ling resembled a manga character come to life."

"The explosive wasn't timed; he could detonate it at any time with the touch of a button. Snake placed his thumb on the trigger, said "Mazel tov," and pushed it."

Snake: "I don't like it. No government has any business fooling around with these Metal Gear contraptions. They might blow someone up."

"Snake imagined that it couldn't have gotten any grosser if he had been swimming in a sewer."

However, some old favorites were also included, such as
"A survellance camera?!," punctuation and all.
 
Frog said:
Yep, that was a good example of bad writing:

Snake could hear them muttering something about a storm. He surprised them by stepping out from behind the crate and standing directly in front of them. "Merry Christmas," Snake said as he delivered two powerhouse punches, left and then right, into the guards' faces. The soldiers plopped to the floor. "I forgot to tell you - Christmas is early this year."

Some more gems:

"Snake thought Mei Ling resembled a manga character come to life."

"The explosive wasn't timed; he could detonate it at any time with the touch of a button. Snake placed his thumb on the trigger, said "Mazel tov," and pushed it."

Snake: "I don't like it. No government has any business fooling around with these Metal Gear contraptions. They might blow someone up."

"Snake imagined that it couldn't have gotten any grosser if he had been swimming in a sewer."

However, some old favorites were also included, such as
"A survellance camera?!," punctuation and all.

Wow, that does sound pretty bad. I hope the entire book isn't like that. Can't believe Ryan Payton let Snake turn into John Mclaine. :<
 
The whole gene plot was always a bit phoney since Dominance genes don't really work that way.
BlockBastard said:
Wow, that does sound pretty bad. I hope the entire book isn't like that. Can't believe Ryan Payton let Snake turn into John Mclaine. :<
One more pop culture icon won't hurt, he's been from Kyle Reese to Snake Plisken.
 
GoncaloCCastro said:
I'll be getting this next month. I love reading and I love Metal Gear, even if the writing is a bit shabby it can't be worse than mine!

Well, those two sentences you just wrote didn't make me want to vomit, so yeah the writing in the mgs book is worse.
 
I'm going through it, too. But yeah, it's not exactly a "challenging" read, I'd like it to be a bit more abstract, rather then purely descriptive.
 
A bit disappointing to here the creative liberties that Benson took when writing the novel, but still I will pick it up no less. I enjoyed the Resident Evil novels and to an even greater (and more surprising degree) the first PD Zero Novel. Rucka was an alright writer, too bad they didn't get him to do it.

Still, when I can, I'll get my hands on it.
 
I gotta check this out. I'm one of those lame-o's that read the Halo novels.
 
Frog said:
Yep, that was a good example of bad writing:

Snake could hear them muttering something about a storm. He surprised them by stepping out from behind the crate and standing directly in front of them. "Merry Christmas," Snake said as he delivered two powerhouse punches, left and then right, into the guards' faces. The soldiers plopped to the floor. "I forgot to tell you - Christmas is early this year."

Some more gems:

"Snake thought Mei Ling resembled a manga character come to life."

"The explosive wasn't timed; he could detonate it at any time with the touch of a button. Snake placed his thumb on the trigger, said "Mazel tov," and pushed it."

Snake: "I don't like it. No government has any business fooling around with these Metal Gear contraptions. They might blow someone up."

"Snake imagined that it couldn't have gotten any grosser if he had been swimming in a sewer."

However, some old favorites were also included, such as
"A survellance camera?!," punctuation and all.

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Haha, that sounds about on par with those old Worlds of Power books. They wailed, I used to read them in class.
 
Frog said:
Yep, that was a good example of bad writing:

Snake could hear them muttering something about a storm. He surprised them by stepping out from behind the crate and standing directly in front of them. "Merry Christmas," Snake said as he delivered two powerhouse punches, left and then right, into the guards' faces. The soldiers plopped to the floor. "I forgot to tell you - Christmas is early this year."

Some more gems:

"Snake thought Mei Ling resembled a manga character come to life."

"The explosive wasn't timed; he could detonate it at any time with the touch of a button. Snake placed his thumb on the trigger, said "Mazel tov," and pushed it."

Snake: "I don't like it. No government has any business fooling around with these Metal Gear contraptions. They might blow someone up."

"Snake imagined that it couldn't have gotten any grosser if he had been swimming in a sewer."

However, some old favorites were also included, such as
"A survellance camera?!," punctuation and all.

Holy shit :lol

How is Fox's death handled? Is his speech still intact?
 
Motion Picture Soundtrack said:
Holy shit :lol

How is Fox's death handled? Is his speech still intact?

Yup, it was slightly tweaked but just about the same. The most memorable lines from it are all still there. The majority of the dialog in the book is straight from the game.
 
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