Simon Belmont
Banned
I know.... I know things have been said... but I've got some PERSONAL feelings toward this series that I have to let out.
Do you want more views or do you want to get your feelings out?
I know.... I know things have been said... but I've got some PERSONAL feelings toward this series that I have to let out.
I know.... I know things have been said... but I've got some PERSONAL feelings toward this series that I have to let out.
You have to decides if you are doing this for passion or clicks. Its rare for passion to translate to cash for most. Most who manages to do that have much better quality videos or started when YouTube was young or before YouTube. From what i see, its a harsh world on Youtube and Youtuber will need really great video to just attract viewers. I will be honest, i went though some of your videos and none of them are any interesting since there are so many great alternatives. People who don't know you won't even click on you other videos and take a look since there are so much contents nowadays.
I didn't last more than 20 seconds. You look like you needed to shower, the camera angle is creepy, you're stiff, and the attempts to put tone in your voice come off as forced and therefore irritating. I'm not sure you have the personality to do YouTube. Most people are very energetic and over the top. You're awkward and sedate.
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If you can't handle comments like that, you are not ready at all for big youtube. Comments only get much worse from hereI think I'm gonna remove the video off GAF. Getting some comments like "I guess everyone has a thing they're good at. This isn't yours."
If you can't handle comments like that, you are not ready at all for big youtube. Comments only get much worse from here
A couple notes:
-Your voice is fine. Your on-camera presence needs work. It comes across as stilted and awkward; people thought you were reading off a script for a reason. I would ditch these segments altogether or put work into learning how to present better
-The gameplay analysis was much better than the story recap. You would have been much better served deleting the story recap entirely and devoting only a couple minutes (max) to it at the end of the video
-People here are right that you need a niche. I know your name is "Retrospect Greg", but retrospects aren't really a niche. They're too broad and common on YouTube already.
I don't think the op gonna want to read this comment.
Re-reading it, it is a bit harsh, however I think my points are all valid, even if expressed in a bad way.
Concerning the shower. On further inspection, it looks like a problem with the lighting and the camera angle. Makes it look like the person is dirty and greasy when it's just the reflection of light. Makeup would fix it, but also using better lighting would fix it too.
There is still a lot of work to be done on voice and presence. OP does not come off as natural, and is incredibly awkward. It makes the whole thing seem amateurish. I understand youtube is full of amateurs, but it's a whole different level.
The last point about the personality. For OP's style of video - just him in front of a camera, there needs to be something entertaining. Some energy he's bringing.
There are youtubers who do things with low energy analysis (Matthewmatosis and VaatiVidya are good examples), but they rarely ever even appear on camera (and as far as I know, don't in their videos, ever).
They use footage and art to make the video entertaining with the content making it interesting and worth watching. Even though their style is sedate, they still sound comfortable and confident. They can project their voice and make you interested. Until OP can do that, he'll struggle. It just comes with practice.
Note: I never commented on OP's content. I didn't get to it, because the intro is so off-putting.
I also should say, the comments I said I have also received on my work. I do a lot of lectures and presentations (although I'm forced, I don't choose to) and I had to really work to get my voice to not be monotonous and awkward. I had to work hard to try to capture the audience. This kinda thing doesn't come naturally to everyone, and takes a hell of a lot of work to get right.
I have taken comments into consideration... you're right.. my on-camera personification needs work... so I guess my strength really is in doing voiceovers.
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I think I'm gonna remove the video off GAF. Getting some comments like "I guess everyone has a thing they're good at. This isn't yours."
True. My ex boss quit to go full time YouTube. He studied what makes videos in his genre successful and banged out videos and made deals with YouTube networks. During peak ad times he was making like $30k a week. That'll keep going up.
Took him a little over a year to achieve this and get like 200k subs.
Yeah I asked myself that question but I also said if ProJared, SomeCallMeJohnny all did videos on SA2 then why can't I?
Maybe you should deactivate comments on your videos for a little while?I think I'm gonna remove the video off GAF. Getting some comments like "I guess everyone has a thing they're good at. This isn't yours."
After watching SomeCallMeJohnny's vid ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbfXqOMf0Ak ), it soured my opinion of your vid a bit. I got major deja vu from the similarities to the point where I started to feel like your retrospective was more of a remake of his retrospective.
I don't know if this is just an issue of common format, common complaints against SA2, or what. If they are common, you'll have to work ten times harder to establish your uniqueness. You're working on a Sonic Heroes retrospective...think about everything contained in it that can be found in someone else's video, and consider doing a cut of everything left over (IE the truly unique stuff).
Well I know not to do everything exactly as he did
When I took the small business management course in college, our professor told us, when considering to start (as an example) an Italian restaurant... To ask ourselves, "Does my town need another Italian restaurant?" Or in your case, does YouTube really need another retrospective on Sonic Heroes? Perhaps it does. But in such a competitive space where so many gaming retrospective videos have been done, the onus is on you to present an original take on it, to fulfill a need that other channels aren't fulfilling. Either in terms of presentation style, topic choice, or even the opinion itself. What is it that is different about your video that isn't being fulfilled by, as a direct comparison, Somecallmejohnny? The stance of, "People would watch because of my interesting opinion" isn't a great one, because we all think our opinions are the best.
I would also consider starting with a very specific niche, or a very specific style. Where you will eventually be known as, "He is that guy who does _____ videos" in a general sense. Whether it is doing a bunch of, "____ is a Bad Sonic Level and Here's Why" or "What happened to _____ (dumb Sonic friend character?" videos or whatever interests you. Something punchy, something offbeat, something not too horribly long. Something that either informs or gets your stance across in a pretty concise way.
Anth0ny's suggestion about doing voiceovers at first is a good one, partially for experience sake behind the mic, but also so you don't drive yourself crazy trying to be perfect at everything at once.
The beginning stages of YouTube are a very lonely one, and it can be a little demoralizing, thinking you're working hard on something to just throw it into a void. It can be pretty rough. Good luck!
I didn't last more than 20 seconds watching the video, and it's 30 minutes long???
I felt like Gilbert Gottfried was reading to me about videogames and lost interest quick.
Thanks for the encouraging words! And yeah, I'd definitely agree with the money aspect. That's not the goal right now anyways. Funny enough, I was thinking about starting a vlog type channel. I'm prior military and thought I might have interesting stories to share. Who knows who would find that interesting though lol.
Haha, this is great. Would love to see the OP being managed through this NeoGaf thread to gain youTube "stardom".
OP has to fulfill all wishes and notes GAF-studio gives him. He will be put down regularly on his looks, the tone of his voice. Maybe a little make-up would do a world of wonders?
"Just a little editorial note..." a 3000 word treatment of how to review sonic follows by GAF-studio.
Once OP is burnt out, he'll be sent to rehab, replaced by a younger man, who's just a little more eager to smile.
I have started streaming recently, did an Outlast playthrough and am playing some GTA now but have little idea of how to improve things. Suggestions would be appreciated!
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Cool, I am just kind of... stagnating! I think I need to play with others that have a personality too.i don't know what you're looking for, streaming isn't exactly something we can really give advice on. 'Have an interesting enough personality and commentary as you play as to attract people'
It seems odd to me that this thread is allowed to exist. I've posted links to my YT videos before in other discussions, and I've been called out as just trying to get hits despite adding a few paragraphs of text for the conversation.
Having a thread for asking for improvements one's own channel (though it didn't start with a link) seems kinda weird to me.
That said, I've always thought GAF should have a stickied thread for GAFers to post links to their content, whether it be YT videos, music, books, etc. Rather than banning them except under certain rules, just encourage everyone to post them in one place.
OP worked in the link in a smart way that didn't seem like self promotion. So just be less obvious next time?It seems odd to me that this thread is allowed to exist. I've posted links to my YT videos before in other discussions, and I've been called out as just trying to get hits despite adding a few paragraphs of text for the conversation.
Having a thread for asking for improvements one's own channel (though it didn't start with a link) seems kinda weird to me.
That said, I've always thought GAF should have a stickied thread for GAFers to post links to their content, whether it be YT videos, music, books, etc. Rather than banning them except under certain rules, just encourage everyone to post them in one place.
It seems odd to me that this thread is allowed to exist. I've posted links to my YT videos before in other discussions, and I've been called out as just trying to get hits despite adding a few paragraphs of text for the conversation.
Having a thread for asking for improvements one's own channel (though it didn't start with a link) seems kinda weird to me.
That said, I've always thought GAF should have a stickied thread for GAFers to post links to their content, whether it be YT videos, music, books, etc. Rather than banning them except under certain rules, just encourage everyone to post them in one place.
I think this is a great thread for sharing YouTube advice, criticism, ECT. I certainly didn't mind giving OP some advice and I could benefit from some of the advice from the community in here as well.
That being said, I don't think people should just be straight linking to their channels or videos unless someone specifically asks for them to do so. I'd like to see this thread continue as a legitimate place for discussion and not just spam.