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Student Faces Criminal Charges Over High School Essay

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Tsubaki said:
No. Honors/AP classes give you 5 points for an A, 4 points for a B, 3 for a C, 2 for D, so while your max GPA is 4.0, your weighted GPA can theoretically be up to 5.0 It's unlikely you'll have taken honors classes your entire high school (honors PE?), so 5.0 is pretty much impossible.

My school actually had a 6.0 scale (6 for IB, 5 for AP, 4 for regular). I think the max was 5.6 or something like that due to Health, Government, and Economics.
 
LOL. Glad we have armed forces like the Marines that fight for freedoms and stuff. Other wise you could go to jail just for writing .... NVM.
 
Tralfamadore64 said:
Ah. West Virginia public schools FTL then.

Nah, Huntington High offers them. I can also verify that those AP courses have not made any of their students better writers.

Our language is screwed.
 
Instigator said:
Where were you when this thread was posted?

http://www.neogaf.com/forum/showthread.php?t=152886

I already posted in there a couple of hours ago. ? Sorry I don't understand.

John_B said:
What is the FBI doing tapping into these girls messaging software?

Their job, I suppose.

ZombieSupaStar said:

Yeah I guess. But when concepts such as "freedom" and "liberty" and being thrown around as they are today...you'd expect that mistakes would not be repeated.

I think what is clear in this case is that this student did not make any threats in his writing. It could be debated whether there were indirect threats...but in that case you follow up with some questioning and maybe create a psychological profile of the student in question...not arrest him.

I can't blame teachers for being cautious, but it seems that there is no middle ground. You have whackos like Cho no getting the help he needs, and then you have students like this who don't have the option to get help, they just arrest his ass and press charges. I wonder if there are any politicians who are willing to look at this issue and straighten things out.
 
Unfortunately, you check most of your constitutional rights at the door when you go into a government building (i.e.; public schools). Free speech is heavily regulated in public schools, and a lot of your other rights are suspended.

Prior restraint is legal.
Limiting speech is legal, not to mention easy to defend with the current precedents. (bu-bu-bu, it disrupts the learning environment!)
No probable cause needed for search and seizure. ("reasonable suspicion" required, so broad they may as well say anything goes)

etc, etc.
 
I wanna see the whole essay, I mean criminal charges are stupider than boston going after the ad agency after the bomb scare, but I wanna know why they thought it warranted this shit.
 
PhoenixDark said:
Did it go something like this?

It's sad that we live in a world where women are still considered second class citizens, and are paid less. I'm sure the female working here does far more work than the administrator, yet she most likely gets paid far less. I would like her to know that I feel her pain, and I can help. It's high time that she got a break. Let me rub your shoulders, and let your hair down. I want to gently suck on your feet; each toe deserves special attention, the attention their body has so long craved. I can feel an empty space inside you, hiding, hiding, hiding away in the corner where no light shines. Let me be your light. I will take it to the deepest parts of your body, until I expose the beautiful woman behind the shades. The smell of hope and sweat greets my nose as I dive into the depths of your womb; someday a child might be brought through this dock, but right now I can only stir the waves back and forth with my tongue. A faint flutter arises. A pause. And waves flow back and forth building momemtum, building pressure, building excitement. The dock explodes, yet no harm is done. Only the deep smile of a woman done right.

:lol :lol :lol
 
No quarrel on you qualifications as a writer, but as a teacher, don't be surprised on inspiring the first cg shooting.
That's the dumbass line that got him arrested. And how does he have an A+ average when he can't write or even spell the simplest words correctly? Although, from his Author's Note in the newspaper, he can write and spell perfectly fine, so he's just being a dick in class. Oh, noes, she bakes for her students!
 
Tralfamadore64 said:
Ah. West Virginia public schools FTL then.
not all of them. Even my school had it (way back in 95) and I doubt you could find the city on a map. :lol The only problem was that you had to go to an actual college to take the courses and it was about 45 minutes away.
BigGreenMat said:
Ugh, this teacher should have been at VT. Take that to mean whatever you want.
that's just ignorant.
Zoe said:
http://www.dailyherald.com/story.asp?id=306827

The official statement from the student--has the essay plus his explanation.
On an additional note, I have completed the MEPS (Military Entry Processing Station) examinations, and yes a psychiatric evaluation is included in the process. If I'm qualified to defend the country, I believe I'm qualified to attend school.
:lol
 
If the FBI goes after people based on what's being said in MSN/AIM convos....
:lol :lol :lol Oh boy are we all ****ed.

But yeah, on a more serious note, definitely ****ed up. Seems to me people these days just to misinterpret any correlation freely.
 
Having read his entire essay and his notes, there's a couple of things worth noting.

1) This "essay" is garbage.

2) His points about organized education are pretty spot on, allbethem expressed in awful grammar and phrasing; I've often thought many of these things myself.

3) His essay is likely garbage because he feels the way he does about organized education, as well as his special hatred of English.

4) The kid was using the recent VT shootings as a springboard to underscore his own point--which, in the mind of a sixteen-year-old, was likely an "edgy" and "intelligent" writing practice.

I don't see anything wrong with the essay--other than the fact that it's trash. If he doesn't like organized education, he should just drop out. Good luck getting into the Marines without a GED, though.
 
JzeroT1437 said:
Having read his entire essay and his notes, there's a couple of things worth noting.

1) This "essay" is garbage.

2) His points about organized education are pretty spot on, allbethem expressed in awful grammar and phrasing; I've often thought many of these things myself.

3) His essay is likely garbage because he feels the way he does about organized education, as well as his special hatred of English.

4) The kid was using the recent VT shootings as a springboard to underscore his own point--which, in the mind of a sixteen-year-old, was likely an "edgy" and "intelligent" writing practice.

I don't see anything wrong with the essay--other than the fact that it's trash. If he doesn't like organized education, he should just drop out. Good luck getting into the Marines without a GED, though.

I said wow.
 
JzeroT1437 said:
Having read his entire essay and his notes, there's a couple of things worth noting.

1) This "essay" is garbage.

2) His points about organized education are pretty spot on, allbethem expressed in awful grammar and phrasing; I've often thought many of these things myself.

3) His essay is likely garbage because he feels the way he does about organized education, as well as his special hatred of English.

4) The kid was using the recent VT shootings as a springboard to underscore his own point--which, in the mind of a sixteen-year-old, was likely an "edgy" and "intelligent" writing practice.

I don't see anything wrong with the essay--other than the fact that it's trash. If he doesn't like organized education, he should just drop out. Good luck getting into the Marines without a GED, though.

I'm aggravated that the original link posted for the story only included the guy's first paragraph.

Having read the essay in its entirety, I agree with what you said completely. This whole thing is definitely just a really immature kid's attempt to be edgy. Any high school in America is likely to have at least a handful of kids like this: completely innocuous, but trying their so hard to find some sense of identity and individuality that the only way the can find to rebel is to by trying to be edgy.

If not for the line "No quarrel on you qualifications as a writer, but as a teacher, don't be surprised on inspiring the first cg shooting" and coming so close to the recent VT shootings they may have just given the dude the C or D he deserved and forgotten the whole thing.
 
Someone who writes so poorly really shouldn't be bitching about required English courses.
 
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