Good day, sir.
Going to give you my point by point breakdown...hold on to you butts.
- Lose the IMPACT font. EWWWW.
- Writing/Direction/Post Production...it's not centered right
- I'd drop writing, a reel isn't going to show that
- This is way too long. Reels shouldn't be longer than 2 minutes. Your reel should just be a quick taste for someone to see your work, get them excited so they want to look into your work further. This shows too much, I don't need to know what project it is, nor do I need to waste time looking at a title setting up what the project is.
- We don't see the first footage until 13 seconds in. Get it to 5 seconds, we're there to see your work. We know your role there, this is your work. Your name, then BAM, straight to your work.
- Nooooo, this format is not good. It's long and boring. I don't want to see an entire fashion commercial. I want to see a clip or two from it and move on.
- 90 seconds from "Predictable"? I didn't predict that (see what I did there?). Pick 3-4 shots from it that you like the best, and put them in.
- Yeah, this just needs to be quick stuff showing off a sample. Pick a hot song and cut the song down to 90-120 seconds and cut a fast paced montage of your best work to highlight what you can do. Showing off too much of a project will only wear down the viewer and make them want to turn it off. If I want to check out your short, I'll do that, after I watch a highlight reel of your work.
Yeah, I think that's all I really need to say. Rethink the format of it because it should be flashy and sexy.
Here's my reel...it's old (September), but it shows off some work, and then it stops playing...the end sucks, but whatever. If people make it that far, they will forgive the lack of a 'punch' to the ending (the remix just fades out...bleh).
https://vimeo.com/11014299