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We created our first strip and we need GAF comments

BTW, i like your drawings of Kutaragi and Iwata. Add peter moore to the mix, and those three characters could drive your entire series.
 
Purement et simplement à chier. A côté, VGCats c'est le summum de l'humour vidéoludique, et pourtant Dieu sait que c'est de la bonne fiente odorante :)

Ahah, just kidding.

Actually, that's one of the few times I found a web stripcomic about videogames funny. Not "OMG LOL ROFLMAO", that's for sure, but I smiled, and that's the purpose of the strip. Everyone who has a remote interest in videogames and browse gaming forums should understand the whole strip. Talking about that, a "Kaz Hirai vs Reggie - Riiiiidge Racerrrrr vs taking names" dedicated panel could have been something nice

What I disliked is the fact you have to scroll in order to keep reading the strip. Put the panels horizontally. That, and 3/4 panels per strip is enough, more makes the strip too long.
 
Sad_Panda said:
Purement et simplement à chier. A côté, VGCats c'est le summum de l'humour vidéoludique, et pourtant Dieu sait que c'est de la bonne fiente odorante :)

Ahah, just kidding.

Actually, that's one of the few times I found a web stripcomic about videogames funny. Not "OMG LOL ROFLMAO", that's for sure, but I smiled, and that's the purpose of the strip. Everyone who has a remote interest in videogames and browse gaming forums should understand the whole strip. Talking about that, a "Kaz Hirai vs Reggie - Riiiiidge Racerrrrr vs taking names" dedicated panel could have been something nice

What I disliked is the fact you have to scroll in order to keep reading the strip. Put the panels horizontally. That, and 3/4 panels per strip is enough, more makes the strip too long.
That's because the strip is intented to fit in our website design :D
 
{Mike} said:
3 : Cyclism

Best part is your butchered english.

Heh, sorry, It just doesn't do it for me, maybe its the fact I have to piece it togehter, but its just not really my sense of humour.
 
Totally my sense of humour.
Well drawn too.
Only too long, make it 3/4 panels and it's perfect imho :).
Definitely keep 'em coming :).
 
{Mike} said:
That's because the strip is intented to fit in our website design :D

For Jeux-France, right (I assume that J-F Strip is short for "Jeux-France strip") ? Then I don't understand why you can't put it horizontally. It won't butcher the website design, and it will be much more pleasant and easier to read.
 
Oh, and ofcourse, get an English version going too ;).
Or at the very least put an english translation beneath every strip :).
 
It really doesn't need the last panel. The previous panels are jokes of themselves.


The French is no obstacle for this specific comic. It is easy to understand for everyone that can read English.
 
Why is the guy from the UK in the Videogaming panel saying Allo..?

Shouldn't he, uh... be saying Hello, since he's... ya know, English and all? :)
 
Sad_Panda said:
For Jeux-France, right (I assume that J-F Strip is short for "Jeux-France strip") ? Then I don't understand why you can't put it horizontally. It won't butcher the website design, and it will be much more pleasant and easier to read.

No, Jeux-Force, my website. For now it's pretty amateur, but we are working hard to create a reference. It just takes lots of time and ressources.
 
Not funny at all... Just a hodgepodge of stuff that on their own, could be pretty funny if developed. But all together... just... cluttered and confusing.
 
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