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The NeoGAF Poetry Society: Challenge #14: The Dark

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AnkitT

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The NeoGAF Poetry Society: Challenge #14: The Dark
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Theme: The Dark
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Interpret this theme as you like. The dark can be figurative or literal. A representation of a story in the dark, or someone not knowing the full facts and being in the dark. Many ways to use this theme, and ties up nicely with the secondary objective.

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Secondary Objective: Add Zombies to taste
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Just as it says on the tin. Add zombies to any capacity in your poem.
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Poetry thread Rules version 1.2:
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1. This thread is not merely for winning or losing, but for critiquing and improving your own craft.
2. This poetry thread 'contest' will end on a Friday, and voting will last until Sunday at midnight. You cannot win unless you vote. Although you don't have to submit a piece to vote.
3. The winner must then provide the next challenge theme for the following two week period. Some weeks like during E3, this may not be possible, so we will have an interim one week period until normality is resumed. As a general rule, we like to keep this on the alternate week to the Creative Writing Thread.
4. There are no word count limits, make it as long or as short as you want.
5. Optional secondary objectives are not mandatory, you can include them or not.
6. Further addition to rule five: you can also try the secondary objective as a secondary piece. Just make sure you label it as such.
7. Vote for your favourite poems. Voters should award first, second and third places to their favourite three poems. Don't vote for the same author twice. And watch out for pieces that are labeled ineligible. :) Comments on these pieces labelled as such are welcome but you just can't vote for them.
8. During the count, First place is allocated three points. Second place is allocated two points. And third place is allocated one point.
9. In the event of a tie, the tally will be counted again with first place being allocated three and half points. If it isn't resolved then, it will be up to the OP (most likely the previous winner) to decide to how to go about things.
10. Winner gets a round of applause and will have the records stating it as such. After which Rule 3 is in effect and we start a new thread.

Deadline: Friday, October 29th, 2010 at 11:59pm, Pacific.

You should get your votes in by: Sunday, October 31st, 2010 at 11:59pm, Pacific.

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Previous Threads:
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Poetry Thread #01: Reflection
Poetry Thread #02: Making the Blind See (+ 5W poems)
Poetry Thread #03: Interior (+ Incorporate a song or album title)
Poetry Thread #04: History (+ Dream Song poems)
Poetry Thread #05: A View From Afar or Within (+ Clerihew poems)
Poetry Thread #06: The Surreal and the Fantastical (+ Haikus)
Poetry Thread #07: Expectations versus Reality (+ Ode)
Poetry Thread #08: Mirror's Edge (+ Rhymes)
Poetry Thread #09: Look on the Bright Side (+ poem must end with _________________ as it's last line)
Poetry Thread #10: Obsolete (+ Ink)
Poetry Thread #11: Pride (+ Kanye West)
Poetry Thread #12: Passing By (+ allegory)
Poetry Thread #13: Take This Society (+ Ballads)
 
Congrats on the win AnkitT, and I like the theme - now I've just got to make myself write something well before the deadline, rather than at the last minute.
 

Timedog

good credit (by proxy)
Nothing

Don’t cry for me, Argentina,
Not because my bones ache,
Not because I feel soulless,
Not least because I live in an age where I don’t belong anywhere,
Anywhere is a train station you meet once, admire for a bit, smile, leave and never think about again,
I walk the world a vapor, grasping nothing,
And when nothing is what’s tangible, I repaint nothing into the colors I want to see,
I rework it in my own image, if only so that I can sink my teeth into it in that darkness,
But food always tastes better when someone else prepares it.
 

AnkitT

Member
Memories of lighter times
Times of soft focus and shiny dimes
Depraved of luminosity for too long
A faint memory though, still moves along
Remember reading existentialism fondly
Was proud of it, now travel in prides fondling
No way to know which way to go but smell
So many times stepped and fell

All memories ghosting, veins calcified hard
Primal thoughts remain, functions retard
Leaving slowly so you wont know if were there
Eyelids blink for the last time and fall, as I hear
Eyes wide open, waiting for the evolution to be televised
Smell of flesh, the final blow to a previously rational mind
An orifice expands, soft flesh on the dried dead remains
And the only thing I can spurt out is “BRAINS!”
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Get your entries in, folks!

Also, are we putting the poetry threads on hold as well for the NaNo?
 

Ashes

Banned
Aaah, nearly forgot about this... Don't know what's happening, for nanowrimo. But if we do stop, best start a week later, so that we still have poetry one week, writing the other week...
 

Ashes

Banned
Prison

There is a forest if you care to believe,
That hides its occupants like its dead leaves.

There they stay a prescribed term ordained.
High upon a larks call,
Low beneath the owls hoot.
Lulled by the wood-cutter associate,
Hushed by the lumber-jack in uniform.

Some of the beasts,
Are of the diligent kind,
Scraping the forest clean,
yet, disheartened,
by the blackness
in their poisoned hearts,
Most of them will return.
 

Irish

Member
You are different
You stand aside
That's why they huddle around you
Leave you with nowhere to hide

They breach your defenses
No real reason moving them on
A desire, overwhelming
To make you the same

They plant their seed
In your open wound
Then they will leave you for a while
You'll be joining them soon

Destroying you would be far too simple
Because there is no victory in that
That's why they leave
You won't want to fight back


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I know it's late, but I totally forgot about this with NaNoWriMo and the like...
 
Smaug

Through briar topped fell and 'twixt snow-capped peaks
In deep cavernous crags where light ne'er does reach
Sleeps a mind, old as stone and sharp as flint
Atop a pile of jewels that in firelight do brightly glint

Keen of eye and fierce of breath
All run cowering at his behest
A fierce old dragon, red scaled beast of lore
Asleep in the lonely mountain the dwarves called Erebor

Jealous of temperament and quick to anger
Should the beast find theives to capture
For those who seek his wealth, he abhors
Dragon fire and savage swords in Eriador!
 

Ashes

Banned
Excellent! in fifty years time, when all is said and done, you'll remember that little poetry thread, that most forgot but you did not, and kept it going. Go regulars! :lol
 

AnkitT

Member
Vote tally:

Bootaaay - 6
Timedog - 5
Ashes1396 - 5
Irish - 5
AnkitT - 3

Bootaaay! Claim your crown, for you have won this contest! :D
 

Irish

Member
Congrats!

I think we're going to take a break and then I believe we'll start a week after November ends.
 

Ashes

Banned
Up to you, I guess. Prefer the break myself. Also please choose the alternate week of the Writing thread. :D

edit: beaten. But we're saying pretty much the same thing I think.
 
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