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Sober

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I am writing a novel right now and its almost backbreakingly hard.

At times my head hurts during the process and others I just let it write whatever comes on my mind.

I amnot even sure how good my grammar or coherent my writing is but I think I'll leave this step to the end.


I already had to restart once because I wasn't satisfied with my previous writing and it didn't feel genuine to me.Like I wasn't writing what I really wanted.

I wonder how bad or good it really is at 1,115 words or if it even writes like a damn novel.

Also I am just writing as it comes to my mind.

My previous try involved listing together concepts and lore/ideas and adhering to them as I write ,but i found it too restricting and suffocating.

I guess I'll just keep going and see what happens.
Let me tell you about the process that is NaNoWriMo
 

Jintor

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Lol. 1158 is less than one nano days output.

It's far more important to have your words and ideas out there now so you can edit then later, instead of 'in your head' where you'll 'write it someday'. There's too many books that only exist in theoretical phase space...
 

HeelPower

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I only write when I get ideas or really feel like writing.

Its my outlet when I feel stressed.Its not professional but it is what it is.

I'll check out NaNo hopefully ,but I certainly can't crank out a novel a month lol
 

Ashes

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I only write when I get ideas or really feel like writing.

Its my outlet when I feel stressed.Its not professional but it is what it is.

I'll check out NaNo hopefully ,but I certainly can't crank out a novel a month lol

What's life without a little challenge? Trust me. Come December 1st, you'll look back and go: wait, how did I just write most of a novel? Did I really do that? Damn. I did do it. Awesome!
 
What's life without a little challenge? Trust me. Come December 1st, you'll look back and go: wait, how did I just write most of a novel? Did I really do that? Damn. I did do it. Awesome!
"Most of a novel I'm going to turn around and set on fire", more realistically.

But you should do it anyway! Even if you can only salvage half of what you write, that's still a large slice of a novel written in only a month.
 

Timu

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Everyone owes it to themselves to try NaNoWriMo at least once.
I tried Nano back in 2010 and 2011 but last year in 2013 is the 1st time I succeeded in completing a novel before the end of the month, and I'm looking to do the same for this years within a few months.=p
 
NaNo is what got me into writing "high" word counts daily. I was able to complete a 120K manuscript this summer thanks to NaNo helping me turn off my inner critic. It's a lot easier to edit after the fact than it is slaving away one sentence a time.

I was never in the habit of writing nonsense to get the word count up like some people in the local NaNo chapter did, though.
 

cntr

Banned
Just noticed this thread.

I'm aiming to be a writer, but I'm not sure how to get going. Most guides give unspecific advice on improving pre-existing writing, when I want something like writing exercises from easy to hard to get me started on writing. Can you guys offer me anything?
 

Ashes

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Just noticed this thread.

I'm aiming to be a writer, but I'm not sure how to get going. Most guides give unspecific advice on improving pre-existing writing, when I want something like writing exercises from easy to hard to get me started on writing. Can you guys offer me anything?

Write plenty.
Read plenty.
Participate in reading, critiquing, writing, in the poetry, creative writing, and nanowrimo threads. Well... participate in one form or another.
 

MC Safety

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Just noticed this thread.

I'm aiming to be a writer, but I'm not sure how to get going. Most guides give unspecific advice on improving pre-existing writing, when I want something like writing exercises from easy to hard to get me started on writing. Can you guys offer me anything?

Instead of doing writing exercises to get you started on writing, maybe you should just start writing.

If you're in high school or college, try writing for a student literary magazine or newspaper. Start a blog and do movie- or food reviews. If you have an opportunity to do an internship for school credit, write news- or feature stories for a community newspaper or Web site.
 

Mike M

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Just noticed this thread.

I'm aiming to be a writer, but I'm not sure how to get going. Most guides give unspecific advice on improving pre-existing writing, when I want something like writing exercises from easy to hard to get me started on writing. Can you guys offer me anything?

Write plenty.
Read plenty.
Participate in reading, critiquing, writing, in the poetry, creative writing, and nanowrimo threads. Well... participate in one form or another.
In particular, I think hitting up the Creative Writing Challenge threads would be your best all-around GAF resource. Keeps you writing regularly, keeps you reading regularly, and there's always at least one guy who writes 6000 words of critiques every week
 
Planning on finishing my first novel this year. I've edited it three times now, and it's looking pretty solid. One more and I'll be willing to call it "done." Or done in that it'll be good enough to send to agents who can then call it shit.

135 thousand word mix of heroic and high fantasy.

Hoping to go the traditional publication route, though if that winds up failing, self publishing exists.

See what happens.
 
Planning on finishing my first novel this year. I've edited it three times now, and it's looking pretty solid. One more and I'll be willing to call it "done." Or done in that it'll be good enough to send to agents who can then call it shit.

135 thousand word mix of heroic and high fantasy.

Hoping to go the traditional publication route, though if that winds up failing, self publishing exists.

See what happens.
Congrats!

Have you thought about just going the self published route?
 
Congrats!

Have you thought about just going the self published route?
My problem with self publishing is that since literally anyone can do it, it means nothing.

Plus, I've always wanted to walk into a book store and see something of mine on a shelf. I can think of no greater high in the world.

But, if I can't get it publish published for one reason or another, then I'll self publish it. Something is better than nothing.
 
Yup. Trying it once is something I always recommend.

People in this thread saying "do NaNoWriMo!" are really tempting me into doing it, but I don't even know how to write a novel.

I've written hundreds and hundreds of short (very short) stories in a phase where I would write one around 500 words every single day. This phase lasted about three years. It was kind of a challenge to myself more than anything to write every day to see if I had the commitment to do it and yeah, it went okay. Problem with that though is that my brain is so focused on writing that kind of thing that I find long-form writing very difficult. I kind of just get to the point and am done really quickly.

I'm still tempted though, I need to look for some guides and tips for planning a novel!
 
People in this thread saying "do NaNoWriMo!" are really tempting me into doing it, but I don't even know how to write a novel.

I've written hundreds and hundreds of short (very short) stories in a phase where I would write one around 500 words every single day. This phase lasted about three years. It was kind of a challenge to myself more than anything to write every day to see if I had the commitment to do it and yeah, it went okay. Problem with that though is that my brain is so focused on writing that kind of thing that I find long-form writing very difficult. I kind of just get to the point and am done really quickly.

I'm still tempted though, I need to look for some guides and tips for planning a novel!
I'd say find an idea big enough to fit into a novel and then just start. Seemed to work for me anyways :p
 

Brashnir

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I'd say find an idea big enough to fit into a novel and then just start. Seemed to work for me anyways :p

Just a note on this, and not so much a contradiction. When you say a big enough idea, it's not the idea itself that needs to be "big." Since we're on a gaming site, I feel a need to say this, since so many games feel an inexplicable need to try and tell the (exact same) biggest story idea ever of a dude saving the entire universe.

Something relatively small on the grand scheme of things, such as a man who gets in an argument with his father could be a big enough idea provided you have a lot to say on the subject.
 
Just a note on this, and not so much a contradiction. When you say a big enough idea, it's not the idea itself that needs to be "big." Since we're on a gaming site, I feel a need to say this, since so many games feel an inexplicable need to try and tell the (exact same) biggest story idea ever of a dude saving the entire universe.

Something relatively small on the grand scheme of things, such as a man who gets in an argument with his father could be a big enough idea provided you have a lot to say on the subject.
Oh for sure. I meant big in terms of page space, not epic scope. But I can see why that needs to be said :p
 
Short story deadline: Sept. 15

Started last night, 4,915 words in, ~2 hours left in America before midnight.



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Yeeeehaaaaaaaw
 
I had a nightmare about NaNo this weekend for some reason, clear out of the blue. I dunno why I'm already thinking about it.

I've failed miserably two straight years now, I dunno if I have it in me to try again, though I'm sure I could pull of the failing.

The only things that come to me anymore are small stories, private and intimate, rarely about familiar places, often with utterly alien characters, but also nonsensical, abstract, dreamlike. It's the kind of thing I'm confident I can't do well, and even more confident is not what I've ever actually wanted to write, but I think I could at least do quickly and consistently.
 
so, hey, I don't write much and I just remembered why. does anybody else wake up the day after they wrote something and just loathe what you wrote?

if so, how do you handle it and stick with it?
 

Banworthy

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so, hey, I don't write much and I just remembered why. does anybody else wake up the day after they wrote something and just loathe what you wrote?

if so, how do you handle it and stick with it?

No, nobody does that. Writers tend to be egoistical and insensitive. Except me, as you can tell.

However, there is one simple solution to such melancholy. One that also adds to your believability as a writer. The bottle.
 
so, hey, I don't write much and I just remembered why. does anybody else wake up the day after they wrote something and just loathe what you wrote?

if so, how do you handle it and stick with it?

I go through cycles. Sometimes I'm like "wow, someone like ME could write something neat like this?" and then a day later I'm like "this is dreck! I should just give up and burn everything that has this data!"

I still write 500 words a day no matter what mood I'm in. Jogging right before writing helps me because when you're hopped up on cardio-induced adrenaline, you're a lot more lenient on your own ideas and think of neat ways to further flesh them out.


In other news, just passed the 5000 word mark for novel 3. Not much has happened beyond character introductions and some general plot musings, but I'm making progress. Might even be able to finish a good chunk of this before I get my second book out.
 
No, nobody does that. Writers tend to be egoistical and insensitive. Except me, as you can tell.

However, there is one simple solution to such melancholy. One that also adds to your believability as a writer. The bottle.

before, during, or after writing? or all three? I love bourbon so I can do this.


I go through cycles. Sometimes I'm like "wow, someone like ME could write something neat like this?" and then a day later I'm like "this is dreck! I should just give up and burn everything that has this data!"

I still write 500 words a day no matter what mood I'm in. Jogging right before writing helps me because when you're hopped up on cardio-induced adrenaline, you're a lot more lenient on your own ideas and think of neat ways to further flesh them out.


In other news, just passed the 5000 word mark for novel 3. Not much has happened beyond character introductions and some general plot musings, but I'm making progress. Might even be able to finish a good chunk of this before I get my second book out.

congrats on the progress you're making! sounds good to just make sure you write something every day regardless. and exercise isn't a bad idea either. I could use it anyway.
 
The more I work on this nano thing, the more I don't want to work on this nano thing.

I wanted to be done by the end of the month, but that's not looking likely.
 

TheSeks

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I had a nightmare about NaNo this weekend for some reason, clear out of the blue. I dunno why I'm already thinking about it.

I've failed miserably two straight years now, I dunno if I have it in me to try again, though I'm sure I could pull of the failing.

The only things that come to me anymore are small stories, private and intimate, rarely about familiar places, often with utterly alien characters, but also nonsensical, abstract, dreamlike. It's the kind of thing I'm confident I can't do well, and even more confident is not what I've ever actually wanted to write, but I think I could at least do quickly and consistently.


So write a collection of small stories and make them NaNo's word count. NaNo isn't "just novels" as they say.

So long as you do the 1,667 words per day, you should be able to hit it in the month.
 
so, hey, I don't write much and I just remembered why. does anybody else wake up the day after they wrote something and just loathe what you wrote?

if so, how do you handle it and stick with it?
Yeah. It's a bitch when you're on draft two or three of a book and going, "oh. all of it sucks for now and forever and what am I doing with my life?"

Then the next day it's all fine because my headspace is different.

But as others said: drinking helps! I figure if I want to be the next Hemingway i need to drink like him. Can't really figure out what comes next though.
 
so is there any help for someone that can't come up with plot ideas? like i have a world, places, history, creatures, species, characters etc... i just don't know what to do with them. seems like i shouldn't try to write, haha.
 

Banworthy

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so is there any help for someone that can't come up with plot ideas? like i have a world, places, history, creatures, species, characters etc... i just don't know what to do with them. seems like i shouldn't try to write, haha.

Just dig up some forgotten B-films and copy them mercilessly. Execution is the trick.
 

Sober

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so is there any help for someone that can't come up with plot ideas? like i have a world, places, history, creatures, species, characters etc... i just don't know what to do with them. seems like i shouldn't try to write, haha.

Plot? Just make something happen, have the characters react to it as a jumping off point.
 

Banworthy

Banned
now that i could probably do.

except the execution part.

Your question specifically addressed the concepts(plot, places, characters), not the execution.

No matter. Do your part and then send the raw material to me. I'll write ya a story you can show your distant transsexual cousin with pride.

We'll talk about the selling rights and other nonsense later.
 

Cyan

Banned
so is there any help for someone that can't come up with plot ideas? like i have a world, places, history, creatures, species, characters etc... i just don't know what to do with them. seems like i shouldn't try to write, haha.

Start with the basics. One of your characters wants something a lot. This person is your protagonist. Something, or someone, is preventing them from getting it (the someone would be your antagonist). Try/fail cycles occur, where the character tries to get what they want and fails, several times, trying different things each time and usually escalating the conflict in the process. Ultimately, they finally try and succeed (or try and fail for good).
 
Plot? Just make something happen, have the characters react to it as a jumping off point.

i feel like i should plan though, the 'book' i have so far has multiple characters in a few different places and they need to have something happen that ties them together or otherwise it's all a bit pointless.
hmm, maybe i am out of my depth with this idea.

Start with the basics. One of your characters wants something a lot. This person is your protagonist. Something, or someone, is preventing them from getting it (the someone would be your antagonist). Try/fail cycles occur, where the character tries to get what they want and fails, several times, trying different things each time and usually escalating the conflict in the process. Ultimately, they finally try and succeed (or try and fail for good).

this is definitely the basics that i'm missing. i think i need to focus on this flow of ideas on one character first, at least, then see whether i can introduce other characters, all with their own motives etc, in to a larger plot.
 
so is there any help for someone that can't come up with plot ideas? like i have a world, places, history, creatures, species, characters etc... i just don't know what to do with them. seems like i shouldn't try to write, haha.
If you have all of that down then awesome! Now think of something to disrupt the daily flow of whatever your place is. Could be big, could be small, could be anything. Just give the characters something to do. Or just start writing about them and see if they stumble upon a narrative themselves.
 
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