Squiddy has been promoted from biscuit to cracker? What's the next tank, potato chip?
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Squiddy has been promoted from biscuit to cracker? What's the next tank, potato chip?
SquiddyBiscuit: The best thing about the story was the mythology. I don't know did you make it all up or is it based on something, but that sounds like the sort of nonsense some people (or aliens) might believe in. The story itself worked well enough, but somehow it felt like a bit of a letdown after an intriguing start. I think you could do something more interesting with the world.
Full savants:
Not to be confused with partial savancy which can be found in pre-expansion humans and degenerated worlds. Full savants excel in all mental areas without any drawbacks, and are to humans as they are to dogs. Some savants are biological, while others are artificial lifeforms. The term "savant" now refers to full savants alone, while the previous form of savancy, in which only some mental capabilities are excellent but often at a drawback, is called partial savancy.
Tangent - “Monster Within”: I liked the use of haikus as dialogue. Didn't get what the "monsters" were supposed to be.
Crits:
Mike M Boeing Woes: I really liked the newspaper style. Do you work for Boeing? It seemed very personal. This might be a stupid question, but I wasnt sure why the author of the 1st story was a gremlin; whats the significance? I very much enjoyed the story about the Brontosaurus at the end and the thoughtful layout.
Nezumi - There is always Light: Why that line spacing? Anyhow, it doesn't feel very thought out. Like you made stuff up as you went along (which isn't necessarily bad but requires quite a bit of skill to keep it together). I'm not saying you did; it just felt that way to me, which probably signifies a lack of direction.
Nezumi There is Always Light: Wow, this was an awesome story. The ending reminded me of Life of Pi. I was a little confused how someone in solitary confinement would be able to talk to a master but maybe that was an extension of himself.