KarenQ0506 I had an idea to write about the way my boyfriend has VD
Verbal Diarrhea. Urban dictionary defines it as A condition suffered by an individual who has the inability to shut the fuck up, i.e the words keep flowing. And I couldnt have said it better. He makes up words and random phrases and I have to remind him wheres the charming man I fell in love with. But anyway, it was too much work (or a headache) to try and write about it. So naturally, my obsession with cats kicked in and this is all I could come up with. :/ Actually, I am not familiar with all the text lingo either. I had to google them.
Ourobolus I thought your creativity here was amusing. I enjoyed my nickname. The use of our conversation and scenes was clever.
Elfforkusu I thought your poetic story telling was lovely. I take it the boy was a bit of a troublemaker and his mother put the sheriff up to it?
Mike M I like how you researched this matter, whether you used it or not in your piece, it gives it a thorough understanding of what you are writing. The new words to be added to spite the Americans was fun.
Cyan You write beautifully. The flow of your words really bring the reader into the story. I was especially intrigued with the reference to Franklstin (Frankenstein). It reminded me of a new show Im watching, Penny Dreadful. I agree with Charade, your made up words were hard to spot as they all seem legit!
Bootaay Interesting take to a universe united. Im not familiar with these type of stories, so a little hard to follow for me. I like how they concluded not to underestimate a race for what seemed prehistoric technology for one nation was more powerful than others.
Charade Very amusing and a lot of work put into this. Everyone wants to know how this guy got any interview in the first place. Id think that his resume cover letter must have been refreshing to the employer. A bit cocky but maybe they thought he was joking..until he wasnt.
Chainsawkitten This was great. I suck at crossword puzzles. I cant even begin to try and guess at one of these, but kudos for making it.
Kehs This was very intense. I can feel the anger and confusion running through this persons mind. I tried to envision how this person acts in their work life versus what he thought he needed to be. I watch the Netflix show Orange is the New Black. There is a transgender actress who plays a transgender character. But she is very much put together in who she is and wants to be. Your character is very conflicted. Even loathes himself for what he is. If he loved himself he wouldnt need the heels. If he could stand tall and proud, he wouldnt have to live that life.
MollyAttack This left me wanting more. What was the machine he was waiting for?? What happens next?
Tangent Its not farfetched to think that in the future our communication would be limited to telepathy and pictograms. History does repeat itself. The use of words would seem obsolete if we could communicate with our thoughts. Perhaps the written language would be forgotten and we would defer back to the earliest form of writing seen in ancient civilizations.
