ok let me see if i can list all the changes, since so many people have been bravely attempting it.
I drew this page really early. It was the first drawing in the book of some of these characters, including Ramona, so I thought it was worth tweaking them a little to make the whole story feel more consistent. I never had time to fix things like this back when I was first doing the books.
- I moved Scott & Wallace (together) to the right. I havent seen anyone correctly figure that one out. Wallace was getting sucked in to the spine of the book, and it was easiest to move him and scott as one. Thats why Scotts hand is further along Neils chest and why Wallace got further away from Kim.
- Ramona: I redrew her mouth, changed her goggles, fixed the back of her jacket, corrected her bag (this was an early handbag version), changed the pose accordingly, and made some adjustments to her butt.
- Stephen Stills: I redrew his nose / jaw, and edited his eye and eyebrow a little.
- Knives: I changed the patch on her school shirt, fixed up her hand, and did cleanup on her eyebrows, eyes, nose and mouth.
- Kim: I beefed up her eyes a bit (heavier lines) and adjusted her nose & mouth.
- Wallace: I changed his eyes and did some minor changes to his hair. Oh, and the front of his jeans for some reason I didnt like any of the CROTCH DRAWINGS in the original version and I tweaked them. If theres one thing ive learned in the past 8 years, its how to draw CROTCH.
- Scott: Changed his eyebrows. Rotated his nose and moved the mouth up. The seam on his shoulder went away (I think that might have been an accident). The S.P. changed to just SP. Minor crotch adjustments.
- Stacey: Changed her eyebrows. Minor adjustments to eyes, nose and mouth. Some adjustments on the sleeves and hair, mostly due to Scotts arm having moved. I believe I actually made Stacey and Neil a little bit smaller too.
- Young Neil: changed his bangs a little. Adjusted the crotch. The image on his shirt got deleted due to Scotts hand moving, and my colorist redrew it later.
I think thats about it! Other than obviously its in color now.
