you seem to be attempting to deconstruct what this piece encapsulates.
polygon's relationship with microsoft is already under the lens for 750,000 reasons. they are a start-up with an MO built around a bringing code of ethics to popular games journalism, and many would argue that this has already been compromised by the initial MS deal.
since then, the debate regarding conflict of interest and cognitive dissonance within the incestuous game journalism/PR relationship has fired up in to an inferno. the debate has shifted from the crude beginnings of "bought" allegations, and now highlights that even if a journalist is somehow completely incorruptible, the mere appearance of this kind of journalist:subject collusion is damaging enough on its own.
can you think of anything more boneheaded for a start-up in this situation to do in this climate than regurgitate a near word-for-word press release for a trivial microsoft promo deal with a fast food chain, presenting it as news, then actively censor their audience's criticisms?