Just quoting the above for context.
If I may, I would like to give some extended feedback on the current character design of your heroin. Ultimately you are the artists and your creative liberty is going to decide how you portray your character, but you have asked for feedback on lots of things and I hope you don't mind me offering this forward.
Your earlier concept art showed a really distinct, visually interesting, and creative main character that revolved around a green bodysuit as such:
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I thought this design was great. Not a lot of games have short-haired girls as leads, and she had a legitimate costume. If you look at other famous female characters like Samus, or upcoming indie women like
Alyssa from Cosmic Star Heroine or
Alicia from Heart Forth, Alicia, or
Red Robin from Dragon Fin Soup, they are really made distinct and interesting by their characterizing outfits. A dangerous pitfall that has plagued game design for decades is characterizing women with nudity instead of defining and interesting costumes. When female characters are dressed in skimpy outfits that rely on nudity for distinction, they lose anything that makes them recognizable as heroes. As an independent developer, you have the opportunity to create your leading lady however you want without restriction.
Wouldn't you rather have a heroine who is visually distinct with an awesome costume than another overly sexualized girl whose only visual personality is her bare skin? Would she still be mostly naked if she was a boy character? Wouldn't you rather a costume that really makes her stand out as YOUR hero, and not just another mostly-naked girl who is mostly-naked for no reason?
Maybe you have a reason for dressing her so scantily in these photos. Maybe you have a reason for abandoning the awesome green body suit. Maybe in the narrative it makes sense for her to be barely clothed. But from the surface, and as a backer, I feel your leading lady has lost a lot of her personality and flair with the costume change. I want a lead character who looks original, kick ass, and empowered like the other leading ladies linked above. Don't you?