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Joss Whedon’s leaked ‘Wonder Woman’ screenplay is mindblowingly sexist

davepoobond

you can't put a price on sparks
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Is this what a porn script reads like if they even bother to write something?
 
Well, that's disappointing if true but I had heard a while ago that the script was not very good. I'm not a fan of Whedon as a director but I thought WB hiring him for Batgirl was a genius move. Now, I'm starting to dread his handling of the Killing Joke stuff.
They should have gone with Cass.

But as much as I dislike Ultron and the shitty Black Widow / Banner romance, I didn't think the line about her being a monster was sexist. She's a trained killer, that's all.
 

Morrigan Stark

Arrogant Smirk
What the fuck, Whedon. :/ I can't believe he'd regress so much after Firefly? Is this script confirmed to be his?

The Black Widow thing was ridiculously misinterpreted. I think the biggest issue with Whedon's writing is that to him the definition of a strong female character is a woman who can beat people up which is a painfully narrow view. Even Firefly/Serenity just made River a ninja in the end.

Are we pretending Kaylee and Inarra don't exist now? Or Adelle DeWitt? C'mon, he's written plenty of varied, nuanced, complex and non-sexualized female characters. This is why this script is shockingly out of character for him. I wonder if he got carried away in some sort of masturbatory fantasy writing this shit or what... :p
 

Servbot24

Banned
Can someone explain the mansplaining bit of the OP? Yes the dialogue is awful, but I thought mansplaining was using stereotypically feminine terms to dumb down an explanation. The quote by Steve seems like it could have just as easily been delivered to a man. It's treating the audience like they're stupid more so than the opposing character.
 

strafer

member
Something like, sweat glistened off his chiselled eight pack, sliding down his stomach. Camera pans down following the droplet, only to pause on the outline of his thick, long penis showed though his thin sweatpants. It was mesmerizing and emphasized his tall physique, standing a foot over blahblah

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Fisty

Member
Yeah reads pretty poorly, but I'm sure this is just a spec script to get him the job. Gotta make the sale, and he was most likely pretty hard up for work during that time (phrasing)
 
What's the point of digging up this 10 year old script to drag Joss over the coals? Slow news day, or just trying to satisfy some other agenda -- like making negativity around Joss' larger role in the DCEU?

I'm just asking questions here...
 

Nepenthe

Member
Can someone explain the mansplaining bit of the OP? Yes the dialogue is awful, but I thought mansplaining was using stereotypically feminine terms to dumb down an explanation. The quote by Steve seems like it could have just as easily been delivered to a man. It's treating the audience like they're stupid more so than the opposing character.

Mansplaining is when a man explains a concept to a woman in a dumbed down fashion while ignoring or not being aware of her competency in the subject at hand. Usually starts off with saying "Actually...."

And, I mean, yeah Diane is genuinely ignorant when it comes to the ways of life in London and requires guidance, although the good thing is this doesn't translate into stupidity or incompetence.
 
Is this the same script where Diana tells a young girl to get her own cat out of a tree?

I remember that was a cute Superman reference way back when.
 

Pepboy

Member
What's the point of digging up this 10 year old script to drag Joss over the coals? Slow news day, or just trying to satisfy some other agenda -- like making negativity around Joss' larger role in the DCEU?

I'm just asking questions here...

The WW released had a positive reception but it might be interesting to compare it to one of Marvels key screenwriters.

But I think the real reason is that Joss was criticized for Jurassic World edit: correction it was a movie he did after he criticized JW -- the avengers ultron with the joke about prima nocte, then fired back about how he's been a feminist for 20 years, creator of strong female roles on television like Buffy, etc. And in that rebuttal he kind of denounces modern feminism, or one branch of it, I guess.

Since then, there's a devoted segment that really wants to tear him down. You can see echoes of it in this thread, e.g. one poster calling him a fake feminist.
 

MisterHero

Super Member
What's the point of digging up this 10 year old script to drag Joss over the coals? Slow news day, or just trying to satisfy some other agenda -- like making negativity around Joss' larger role in the DCEU?

I'm just asking questions here...
I finished it and it's not even that bad. It'd be interesting to talk to Whedon about certain choices and edits but the conniptions people are having are mostly unwarranted.

I'll say this though, setting the movie in World War 1 works WAY better than the club, South America, and Chimera scenes.
 
Something like, sweat glistened off his chiselled eight pack, sliding down his stomach. Camera pans down following the droplet, only to pause on the outline of his thick, long penis showed though his thin sweatpants. It was mesmerizing and emphasized his tall physique, standing a foot over blahblah

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karasu

Member
But Diana's striking beauty is often the first thing people notice. Even in that Trinity book, Batman was completely bewitched by her before he knew anything about how she thought or felt.
 

Kinyou

Member
I didn't say he was sooooo sexist, I was just pointing out that there is precedent for him having issues with the way he presents women in his scripts so WW wouldn't be exactly a one off.

I don't think he's an intentionally sexist guy (and not generally an unintentional one) but you can be sexist without intending to because of your own viewpoint and preconceptions just like you can any other -ist without intending it. It's just a point he could do better on.
It's stil kind of a difference between "I didnt meant this to be sexist" and "I didnt mean this interpretation at all"

It's literally by accident, and something many people didn't interpret that way either.
 

cr0w

Old Member
What's the point of digging up this 10 year old script to drag Joss over the coals? Slow news day, or just trying to satisfy some other agenda -- like making negativity around Joss' larger role in the DCEU?

I'm just asking questions here...

As opposed to digging up things other famous people have done decades prior to current day and raking them over the coals over it?

This happens all the time, especially with social media. Whedon just happens to be someone whom the usual culprits like, so it's not a big deal, people can change. Right?
 
But Diana's striking beauty is often the first thing people notice. Even in that Trinity book, Batman was completely bewitched by her before he knew anything about how she thought or felt.
Hey, that was just the first time he saw her naked, not the first time they met or interacted.
 

Fury451

Banned
This sounds more like Kurtzman/Orci than Joss Whedon, not to downplay the fact that Joss Whedon has written some hack-ass shit.

Not comfortable dragging his name through the mud without confirmation this is 100% legit.
 

Fuchsdh

Member
I still can't believe this is what some people thought she was saying and somehow missed all the other dialogue in that scene.

Yep. This script if Whedon wrote it solo is far better evidence of sexist attitudes or at least seriously missing the mark of what a good superhero film feat. Wonder Woman should be. But the Age of Ultron bit has always been comically distorted by some people.
 

MsKrisp

Member
Something like, sweat glistened off his chiselled eight pack, sliding down his stomach. Camera pans down following the droplet, only to pause on the outline of his thick, long penis showed though his thin sweatpants. It was mesmerizing and emphasized his tall physique, standing a foot over blahblah

So um... when are you gonna write your screenplay? :D
 

Shaanyboi

Banned
This reads less like "mind-blowing" sexism, and more like your average Hollywood sexism.

Not saying it's good, but this hardly comes off as a shock.
 

Aselith

Member
Something like, sweat glistened off his chiselled eight pack, sliding down his stomach. Camera pans down following the droplet, only to pause on the outline of his thick, long penis showed though his thin sweatpants. It was mesmerizing and emphasized his tall physique, standing a foot over blahblah

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gabbo

Member
not to downplay the fact that Joss Whedon has written some hack-ass shit.

Not comfortable dragging his name through the mud without confirmation this is 100% legit.

Yeah, same. He's never been as truly feminist as he's been touted, but this is the opposite end of the spectrum by a wide margin. There's 'not as feminist' and then there's 'completely, and utterly misogynist' which is what this script reads like.

I doubt his entire body of work, which has has always been feminism-lite, would suddenly take a complete utter drop off a cliff for one script
 

Amneziak

aka The Hound
I read it, and it's not great but it's not as bad as that bullshit gossip-rag site makes it out to be. Don't just bandwagon-hate without reading it.

And there is nothing remotely foot-fetishist either. A couple of close-ups but nothing Tarantino-level here.
 

Xero

Member
Something like, sweat glistened off his chiselled eight pack, sliding down his stomach. Camera pans down following the droplet, only to pause on the outline of his thick, long penis showed though his thin sweatpants. It was mesmerizing and emphasized his tall physique, standing a foot over blahblah

I'm a straight male.........but go on.

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Cybit

FGC Waterboy
...is the entire internet spinning up over something no one's actually confirmed to be from Whedon?

I get outrage generates clicks..but has anyone actually confirmed that this is the script?
 
Well that wasn't very good, but it wasn't going to get made as a film anyway, since WB was only mildly interested in a WW, that was back when they weren't interested in DC heroes outside of Batman / Superman anyway.

Ahh, I remember the days when Joss was nerd king. How the mighty have fallen after the AoU dud.

AOU was like just two years ago, and he's been laying low ever since. Kinda an exaggeration to say he's "fallen", if you ask me.
 
What's the point of digging up this 10 year old script to drag Joss over the coals? Slow news day, or just trying to satisfy some other agenda -- like making negativity around Joss' larger role in the DCEU?

I'm just asking questions here...
Lol you could switch Whedon with Snyder and I'm sure you could probably find the same defense in an old thread.

Or maybe that was your point haha
 
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