Seeing them back to back, I finally realize why I didn't take to The Raid as I did its sequel. The story should be well known by now: Gareth Evans wrote a screenplay and had already planned out a good chunk of the action sequences for the film that would eventually become The Raid 2, only to find that would-be financiers weren't willing to front the money he was asking for unless they saw something suggesting that he could take on such a big undertaking. Enter a quickly-written screenplay that got made for around $1 million that existed as little more than a showcase for his enormously talented martial arts choreographers, and you wound up with a bonafide cult classic that was punching above its weight. The rest was history.
I had suspected in my review of The Raid 2 that Evans was still set on trying to make that kind of film in the original, and watching it again solidified that for me, as I found myself thinking that a lean concept felt a bit stretched, not only in terms of the story it was trying to tell (particularly the momentum-halting exposition dumps in the second half of the film), but also with the action sequences themselves going on a beat or two longer than they needed, particularly in the early scene when the surviving policemen are pinned down by gunfire and are needing to literally fall through floors to get to relative safety, as well as the drug den, which felt more like a demo than an engaging fight scene. Most egregious of all, the edit in the middle of the climatic two-on-one fight that pans back to who-gives-a-shit stabs the movie deep when it needed to be its most fleet-footed. It's a 101-minute film that could have stood to lose about 15 minutes and some better editing. Evans had the chops to shoot a fight scene to give even the most hardened fan of the genre pause for reconsideration, but he didn't quite have the confidence to bring it all together in a satisfying manner.
That being said, Evans should still be commended for doing a hell of a lot with the tiny budget he got. The Raid wasn't called a shot in the arm for nothing, because the fights on a technical level are among the very best that had been shot up to that point, and it scarcely had anyone coming for the crown until the sequel. And even beyond the fight scenes themselves, Evans managed to create a whole lot of tension in the non-fight scenes, including the rather terrific encounter in an apartment with Rama and an injured officer not in the best position to stop an especially sharp probing. The film wears its low-budget trappings on its sleeve, but it's still incredibly impressive that Evans pulled off so much with so little. If this was the quickie show reel for investors, who knew what he'd be able to pull off with the movie he really wanted to do!
This was also the first time I had seen the film with its original soundtrack, which takes on more of a Nine Inch Nails-esque vibe that feels a lot more fitting for the grimier digs and more oppressive atmosphere for a 15-story piece of hell in the middle of Indonesia than the fine electronic score that Mike Shinoda and Joseph Trapanese shared duties on. It seemed rather odd that Sony tried to sell the film so hard on the fact that a member of Linkin Park worked on the soundtrack, as if the film was lacking in other merits, but I guess anything helps when it comes to selling foreign films to subtitle-averting audiences these days.
As it turns out, I don't think there was a single word I said in my review of The Raid 2 I would change, as it's still one of the flat-out greatest action films ever made, and that wouldn't happen if Evans didn't have something to work on with the first film. There isn't a single aspect that wasn't improved upon, and it goes beyond simply having the money to do more crazy stunts. Evans reveals he has a far keener visual eye that extends beyond the fight scenes, with many shots carrying on a gorgeous landscape sheen that benefits from the relative unfamiliarity of Indonesia's landscape and architecture, suggesting a secondary talent as a director who is willing to take you on the world's most violent travelogue. The editing is tighter and cleaner, the characters more memorable even when they don't have proper names, and the narrative is more rounded without having to stop to catch people up to speed, while playing on a significantly grander stage than a ratty apartment building could have ever allowed for.
I wouldn't begrudge a person for preferring the first, as it is its own entity and it's certainly got a kind of charm and pluckiness that a more self-assured film like its sequel isn't going to possess, as it's not trying to fight as hard for recognition (or money) that the original had to. In that sense, the comparison of the first film being The Terminator to the sequel's Judgment Day isn't too far off. But where James Cameron was already a damn solid filmmaker with the first film and had the benefit of two large scale productions in between to further refine his craft for the sequel, Evans is still very much an outsider that requires (mostly) independent financing and no major studio backing to get films made, giving him a nice scrappy quality with The Raid: tons of unrefined potential, but a willingness to learn, to improve, to perfect. Evans never forgot where he came from, but I'll be damned if I want to see him not continue to progress if these are the strides we can expect now. He went from a good film to a stone-cold classic in three years time: who knows what's next.