A little over-busy character design, but at least the character is easily determinable as a male, and might even be over 20. That's a step in the right direction, Lost Odyssey's western appeal probably had a lot to do with the protagonists not being a bunch of kids.
Also, YO DAWG I HEARD YOU LIKE SWORDS SO I PUT A SWORD ON YOUR SWORD SO YOU CAN STAB WHILE YOU STAB
Also, YO DAWG I HEARD YOU LIKE SWORDS SO I PUT A SWORD ON YOUR SWORD SO YOU CAN STAB WHILE YOU STAB