the moment between Spock Prime (Nimoy) and Spock (Quinto) in the hangar, plus the award ceremony with Kirk (Pine), Pike (Greenwood) and the Commandant (Tyler Perry).
Shatner would have played Kirk, but would have appeared as a recording. The timing of the recording is not stated, but would have have been before Star Trek Generations and therefore not violate the canon that Kirk was killed in Generations. JJ Abrams has often noted that dealing with Kirks death was one of the hindrances of including him in the new Star Trek.
Here it is
ALTERNATE SCENE B
SPOCK PRIME
Then I ask that you do yourself a
favor
put away logic, and do what
feels right. The world youve inherited
lives in the shadow of incalculable
devastation
but theres no reason you
must face it alone.
And from around his neck, he removes the PENDANT that
until now, weve only caught glimpses of. Places it on
the table beside his younger self. The feeling in his
eyes is profound
SPOCK PRIME (CONTD)
This was a gift to me. Representing
a dream. One we were unable to fulfill.
(softly)
The way you can now.
And moves to the door. Stops. Offers the VULCAN SALUTE:
SPOCK PRIME (CONTD)
As my customary farewell would appear
oddly self serving, I will simply say
good luck.
Their eyes hold. Spock turns, disappearing into the
corridor. Young Spock stares at the empty doorway a
beat, his mind a jumble of thoughts. Looks to the
pendant
and realizes its a HOLO-EMITTER. After
considering a beat, he hits an activation button and a
MOVING HOLOGRAPHIC MESSAGE materializes before him:
CAPTAIN JAMES T. KIRK. WILLIAM SHATNER. As always,
brash, wry, confident and SINGING:
KIRK/ SHATNER
Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to
you
(stops, grins)
I know I know, its illogical to
celebrate something you had nothing to do
with, but I havent had the chance to
congratulate you on your appointment to
the ambassadorship so I thought Id seize
the occasion
Bravo, Spock they tell
me your first mission may take you away
for awhile, so Ill be the first to wish
you luck
and to say
(beat, emotional)
I miss you, old friend.
and were PUSHING IN on Young Spock, taking in the
image of Kirks future self, the message, but above all
the clear, unquestionable friendship these two men had
INT. CORRIDOR CONTINUOUS
As Spock Prime walks off down the corridor, he passes
right by a man conferring with a nurse the man pauses,
turns
its SAREK. Suddenly overcome by a feeling that
the stranger whos just passed him is
oddly familiar.
KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I suppose Id always imagined us
outgrowing Starfleet together. Watching
life swing us into our Emeritus years
INT. STARBASE ONE HANGAR ETERNAL NIGHT
MUSIC BUILDING glass walls reveal THE ENTERPRISE at
dock, UTILITY CRAFTS floating around it, repairing.
Standing at attention in rows, THE ENTERPRISE CREW
over four hundred of them wearing DRESS UNIFORMS TRACK
DOWN the faces, all proud:
KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I look around at the new cadets now and
cant help thinking
has it really been
so long? Wasnt it only yesterday we
stepped onto the Enterprise as boys?
That I had to prove to the crew I
deserved command
and their respect?
And we STOP ON YOUNG KIRK. Composed, focused, proud. A
man. And to every fans delight, finally wearing his
YELLOW SHIRT. The FEDERATION COMMANDANT stands at a
podium:
COMMANDANT
This assembly calls Captain James
Tiberius Kirk
Kirk breaks from formation, pivots, marches down the
hangar past UHURA
SULU
CHEKOV
SCOTTY. All
Beaming. Notably absent, is Spock. Kirk ascends the
stairs, snaps to attention:
COMMANDANT (CONTD)
Your inspirational valor and supreme
dedication to your comrades are in
keeping with the highest traditions of
service and reflect utmost credit to
yourself, your crew, and the Federation.
By Starfleet Order 28455, you are hereby
directed to report to Commanding Officer,
USS Enterprise, for duty as his relief.
Kirk turns. Walks to
PIKE. In a wheelchair now,
wearing an ADMIRALS UNIFORM. Overnight, his hairs
turned totally grey but despite his trauma, his
prides overwhelming. They SALUTE each other:
KIRK
I relieve you, Sir.
PIKE
I am relieved.
He opens a BOX in his lap glorious in repose, a MEDAL:
PIKE (CONTD)
And as Fleet Admiral, for your
unique
solution to the Kobayashi Maru, its my
honor to award you with a commendation
for original thinking.
Pike containing a smirk, pins the medal to Kirks
chest
PIKE (CONTD)
(a touch choked)
Congratulations, Captain.
KIRK
Thank you, Sir.
Kirk turns to the crowd. Eyes shining. WILD APPLAUSE.
OUR MUSIC SOARS. Bones leans in to Sulu, rolling his
eyes:
BONES
Same ship, different day.
As Kirk rejoins his crew for hugs and congratulations, we
go to the BACK of the hangar
SPOCK PRIME. Watching.
Moved beyond words. He turns and leaves them to it
as
he goes
KIRK/SHATNER (V.O.)
I know what youd say Its their turn
now, Jim
And of course youre
right
but it got me thinking:
INT. STARFLEET HOSPITAL EARTH DAY
Our montage comes full circle as we END on Kirks
transmission:
KIRK/SHATNER
Whos to say we cant go one more round?
By the last tally, only twenty five
percent of the galaxys been chartered
Id call that negligent. Criminal even
an invitation. You once said being a
starship captain was my first, best
destiny
if thats true, then yours is
to be by my side. If theres any true
logic to the universe
well end up on
that bridge again someday.
Stops, grins. Because this is the part he needs to say
most
KIRK/SHATNER
Admit it, Spock. For people like us, the
journey itself
is home.
Young Spocks face. Lost in feelings that flood through
him.