Brothers need to be kept in their place (which is *equal* to their sister, but so many brothers don't realise this). There need to be more pictures of the AMAZING shoes. Far more importantly, Kenzie? You ROCK! You have drive and vision. Sadly, you've had to learn that sometimes people can be REALLY NASTY when they see that someone has an idea and the gumption to follow it up - but you've also learned that if you speak up and don't let the blighters get you down, a lot of other REALLY COOL PEOPLE will support you.
You need, very much, to look at that total every day. Not just now. Not just this year. When you're 23, and trying to sell a concept for another game to a company who thinks that "girls don't do this stuff", you need to look at your total here, and say to yourself "This person doesn't believe in me, but so many other people do - and not just my family!"
Kenzie, you rock, your mum rocks, the head of Kickstarter rocks for being so sensible, and I can't wait to see how this goes.