I'm enjoying the walkthrough, but I think Schur's insight and emphasis on the character themes only goes to show how subservient the actual narrative was to them this season. The entire don't-date-your-coworker plot was factually absurd. The entire city council election was totally absurd. The parts where Schur is enthusiastically talking about character beats, he sells the decisions very well. The rare times he discusses plotting, it goes to show how bare and stupid it was.
RE: The Trial of Leslie Knope:
But the reality is, that is a standard rulethat people in positions of authority cannot date their inferiors or vice versa in governmentand its just not done. You cant legislate relationships, but in the case where two people wanted to date, they would have to be put in a situation where one of them wasnt in any way reporting to the other one. And theres a very good reason for this, obviously: The government is entrusted with the will of the people, and theyre paid by the public that they serve, and if favorable behavior is given to people because of a personal relationship, thats not what the taxpayers deserve.
I really think this is overthinking it. While Leslie nominally reported to the city manager, there's nothing in the show that ever really established direct positions of superiority or inferiority. The "conflict of interest" involved in having the City Manager's office decide funding priorities is not really any worse with Leslie and Ben's romantic relationship than it is with Chris and... anyone's friendship.
In fact, to me, the whole thing just called back to that plot from Season 1 where Leslie eats the spiced meets and drinks the wine from a gift basket she got, but since the gift basket's value was over $20, she wasn't allowed to take it. And then she goes to the disciplinary committee and turns herself in and wants them to investigate her and falls on her sword, and they basically say "Look, you broke a rule, and you shouldn't have, but really who gives a shit? No one was hurt here." and it's supposed to show how Leslie's commitment to the integrity of the system might be a little bit naive versus how real people work.
But this time around, the plot goes the other way, and there's no sense of self awareness about it. Not that I'd expect direct continuity, but I think it exposes how the Ben-Leslie thing was not something that organically came up as a part of the plot, but rather plotting that got shoehorned to serve the character arcs.
Then, when they're talking about the Ice Skating Speech Fiasco thing:
In The Trial Of Leslie Knope, we worked really hard to try to show that hes not a bad person at all. Hes just a person who has a lot of integrity, and sort of like Leslie, he has a deep belief that government is a sacred thing, that you have to behave properly and correctly, and that you shouldnt betray the public trust. He had no vendetta against Leslie or Benhe loves Leslie and Ben very much. We worked hard to make that delineation, and we wanted to reinforce it in this episode by showing its not just that he thinks Leslie and Ben are good government employeesits that he cares for them, especially Ben, with whom he has worked for a dozen years. Despite the fact that theyre different people, and they dont always see eye-to-eye on everything, theres a real friendship there that Chris works hard at.
I think that shows what they were going for, but also why it didn't work.
And then my other main objection which is that the City Council plot is so out of whack it's absurd (as it was on Modern Family, as it was on Parenthood, as I'm sure any political plot will be on any show ever):
AVC: Was there any worry that this was overkill for a city-council race in a small Indiana town?
MS: No, I didnt worry about that. Its a little bit cartoon-y, but his family is the Kennedys of Pawneetheyre the richest, most powerful, most famous family. They own the only real, gigantic business in town, which is responsible for most peoples employment. As a spoiled, entitled rich kid who has decided that hes going to run for city council to impress his dad, its pretty realistic that his name would be everywhere. If youre starting with a 70-point lead, and you have name recognition, you keep your foot on the gas, you put your name everywhere, you obliterate any idea that theres competitionwhich is why he says to Leslie, Im pretty sure Im running unopposed at the beginning. [Laughs.] Its a comedy show, and obviously we have to make it funny, but I dont think its that outrageous that that would be his strategy. Everybody knows my name, so all I have to do is put my name everywhere and let people know that Im running, and then everyone will vote for me.
I don't think Bobby Newport was unrealistic. Plenty of small towns have dynasties that basically buy their way into control of a city.
I think it was unrealistic to follow that by having Leslie get a campaign bus, having shadowy advisors who kingmake the campaign, having 24/7 media coverage of CAMPAIGN ISSUES in the media, having these huge campaign events, and doing this all apparently for literally one city council seat. It wasn't even a general election. You're looking at an event that's probably going to get 25-40% turnout. In a city of 100k, an at-large city council by-election is looking at maybe 10k-20k votes total. The dollar to vote ratio is insane. The idea that voters are so engaged that their hearts and minds are warmed by a thorough debate of the issues is crazy. In real life, Bobby Newport would have just steamrolled over Leslie if you assume he had that kind of name and money advantage. At that level, it's not even possible to really have a grand vision for improving the town.
In fact, in real life, a city council that size is generally entirely free of issues, or if there are issues, they'll break down across a very simple "development/business/make the city bigger versus heritage/culture/keep the city small" factions.
I mean, this is all wasted effort on my part. They did what they did. The end result had some highlights even though I think it was the wrong choice. It's clear they think first towards their characters and only second towards the stories they tell. Hopefully they make better choices next season. But I guess reading this stuff only serves to galvanize how I felt about the season.